Betrayal - original writing

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                                                                                Betrayal                                Chris Taylor 9E

        This story begins with two young adults, called Paul and Katy,  who had been together for almost a year. Their years anniversary was only a few weeks away and Paul had not decided on what he should get Katy yet. So he went to the Jewellery shop on his local high street. The shop was small but had been around since 1942 and was very popular with the people living in the area.

        As he opened the door the he had to squint his eyes, for the sun was reflecting brightly off all the golden jewels inside. It was a bit like stepping into a safe stashed with treasure.

        He had been looking around for over half an hour when the old jewel shop owner who had founded the business came over and asked if he needed any help.

        “Can I help you young lad?” Said the shop owner.

        “Yes, I am looking for something special for my girlfriend for our anniversary.” Replied Paul.

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        “ Ah, I may have just the thing for you. And if you want it to be unique and personal then I can engrave it for you for a tiny fee.”

        So the shop owner showed Paul a beautiful heart shaped locket in silver and gold plating. It was the sort that had a crack in the middle, so that you could split it into two and share with a partner.

        “ Very nice indeed, can you engrave the words; Paul and Katy together forever.”

        “Sure thing!” and the shop keeper took a note of Paul’s phone number, ...

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