Bonfire night.

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Bonfire night

Finally, bonfire night had arrived and excitement filled the air.  The fire was as hot as lava it burned the core of my soul.  Bright yellow orange, flames danced, flickered knowing they were being watched by an amazed crowd.  The fire was a dragon roaring with fury and spitting charcoal, with the immense heat that slapped your face.

    In the middle of the dragon stood guy Fawkes.  He was stuffed with wool, it was wearing a tatty blazer, his eyes were painted red, and he is standing on a big bulky brown stick it looked like a demon.  You could smell the wood as it was burning it smelt like charcoal.   Above the dark black clouds were low and hairy in the skies, like locks blown forward in the bleem of eyes.

          People watching the bonfire were in high spirits.  The babies were crying because the fire was too hot, and the dogs howling like wolfs, the owls in the trees were tooting.  The guards were pushing the people back because they were standing to close to the fire.  I could smell the toffee apples from the food stores they smelt like sweets.  As I was eating the candyfloss it got stuck to my fingers like super strong superglue it tasted like fresh strawberries and sugar.

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            In the distance a man as tall as a giraffe stood shouting come and get your burgers and hotdogs only for 99p each.  I then heard the firework director making an announcement that the fire works were about to commence in 10 minutes, his voice was grumpy as it echoed across the ground.  Now the crowd were jumping up and down like monkeys and shouting we want fireworks they sounded like hyenas, and it was like they were in a night- club.

          Suddenly I heard a loud bang it ...

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