Car Crash - My body felt as if there was a big huge rock inside me. It felt so heavy and ached so much.

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I woke up that morning and had the feeling that I wouldn't be the person I used to be. I had a very faint idea of what happened before I felt like that. My head hurt as if a tornado was swirling inside it. I wanted to open my eyes but they didn't seem to connect with my brain and were not receiving the messages I sent. I heard voices. They seemed to be shouting or was it whispering? I couldn't tell the difference. My body felt as if there was a big huge rock inside me. It felt so heavy and ached so much. My only wish then was to open my eyes wide and see my family in front of me.

I had so many questions shooting like rockets inside my head. What had happened? Why did I feel so sore? How come I didn't remember anything? I tried to calm down and review what had happened. I had a very faint memory of being in a car with my friends. We were going down to the beach to go surfing. But I knew I didn't get to surf. It was way too cold so we