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   As he was flying through the air the captain horribly screeched, “Can everyone fasten your seatbelt because we are encountering turbulence!”

 So he fastened his seatbelt with deep anticipation, shaking as he did so. Bang!!!!, the left engine had blown up, it was bellowing with smoke, there were blood curdling screams masking the engines loud noise. The air masks dropped down from the ceiling. Bouncing As he looked out of the splinted window he could see they were descending, there was another bang!!!!! The petrol tank in the right wing had blown up, there was a ball of fire descending at high speed from the plane it was a deep orange ball of anger and fire. Gravity drew them rapidly to the spinning ground. The plane started to spin as only one engine was working. They were plummeting to the ground like a meteor from space.

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   They impacted on the ocean; the impact broke the plane into two.

 As the water penetrated the cabin, the air pressure decreased; there were screams from the passengers, he un fastened his seat belt and began to swim to the surface, he was lost, worried and was in fear of his life. When to got the surface he was exhausted, he drifted to the island; when he looked back all he had for light was the burning oil on top of the water, he could taste the fumes he fell asleep in a daze of confusion.

   When he ...

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