Cold, muggy and damped the morning started.

Authors Avatar

Simon Wong                                                                   28th October 2003

Original writing course work

Cold, muggy and damped the morning started.

The coldest was getting to my hands and face I was frozen like cold, cooling ice cream from a freezer; I started my long and tiring journey to my first ever public primary school.

It was only six long, winding roads away from my house

I was quite agitated and tensed by the whole new school I was going too.

The dark, gloomy weather was making me feel very down The cold and the windiness was dragging me down and down,  My journey was getting tiring and more tiring as every step I took,

On my way there I thought too my self ‘was it going to rain’; my thought had too come true.

It drizzled with rain with some sunshine.

 I walked even faster and faster but the rain seems to get heavier and heavier.

There was some light breaking over the horizon, but the dark and gloominess’ devoured all sunlight slowly.

Join now!

 It was all dark accept from street light lift on.

I took shelter at a nearby bus stop, and then a car went swooshing pass like a speeding train on a train track.

While it went pass me, rain water splashed over my trousers I wanted too cries. They were brand new trousers my mummy brought for me

But I kept on with my journey as a walked and walked there was aloud clash of thunder, flashing and banging as fireworks exploding into powder with sounds like of car crashes hitting each other.

I went under a shop roof ...

This is a preview of the whole essay