Compare how suspense is built up in 'The Signalman' by Charles Dickens (1812-1879), and 'The Pit and the Pendulum' by Edgar Allan Poe (1843)

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Alex Nash 
                                 
 English Coursework

‘The Signalman’ by Charles Dickens (1812-1879)

   ‘The Pit and the Pendulum’ by Edgar Allan Poe (1843)

           In this essay I will be focusing on the comparisons between the two horrific tales, ‘The Signalman’ written by Charles Dickens and ‘The Pit and the Pendulum’ written by Edgar Allan Poe, and by looking at these tales, will give me an idea of how suspense is built up.

        In the opening paragraph of ‘The Signalman’, suspense is built up immediately as the sense of sound adds confusion and many rhetorical questions are asked such as, who is calling? Why is he calling? What is he calling about? “Hallo, below there!” suggests this. This adds a lot of trepidation for the reader.

           

           When the signalman looks down to the tunnel, once again a lot of anticipation and puzzlement occurs. It makes the reader think why the signalman looks down to the tunnel, like something imaginary was supposed to be there. Then when a train comes past, the movement and sound are described as. ‘A vague vibration in the earth and air’. There is an ‘oncoming rush’ from the narrator and I imagine its an ‘oncoming rush’ for the reader too. This adds to the sense of feelings, helping the reader to visualize the scene and therefore be more personally affected. Maybe something is going to occur when this train comes past.

       

         In the second paragraph on page 131, the narrator uses some words and phrases, which keeps the reader grasped. The narrator describes the feeling he has when he is making his way down to the train track to greet the signalman as  ‘the cutting was extremely deep and unusually precipitate’, which means steep or uncontrolled. He associates the feeling as ‘jagged stones’. Jagged is a very, ruthless word, which adds to the sense of touch to the reader. This builds suspense up, as we are not exactly sure of what the signalman is like. What will his reaction be to this man?

           The short expression ‘great dungeon’ gives the reader the impression that it’s not just the signalman wanting to go to the natural world, but the unnatural world where he is, letting him out into the natural world. As the narrator reaches the bottom of the train track, he signifies it as a ‘barbarous, depressing and forbidden air’, which means, rough, sad and air which is outlawed. The narrator portrays the place as when he got to the railway line he felt as if he had ‘left the natural world’ which indicates the place was like a totally different place what so ever. As far as we know he could have entered into another dimension. It sets the atmosphere too as ‘black tunnel’, and ‘so little sunlight ever found its way’ gives the reader the sight of darkness and sin around the railway track.

         When the narrator arrives at the bottom, straight away you can see the shock and jolt on the face of the signalman. Why is he like this we ask? This builds suspense because it makes us wonder what is the signalman seeing in this man that us readers cannot see.
   

         The place affects the narrator in many ways as the narrator becomes more involved in to the story. He asks many questions such as “lonely stop to occupy is it not?” which the narrator finds it amusing or odd which makes him to start to believe the opposite what he wouldn’t expect. When description such as ‘lamenting wail of the wind’ is used, this is relevant to the story because it adds a lot more atmosphere and also explains a few of the actions of the signalman. Maybe the signalman is a bit insane from being somehow trapped in the deep, dark, cold depth of the railway line.

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        When the narrator says that he does not like the red light and that he would not like to sleep beneath it, he is trying to explain that the red light to him is a sense of danger and that to live around it all the time like the signalman does would be very weary.

       

           There are only two main characters in the story of the signalman, the signalman himself and the narrator. The story being told in 1st person narrative is more direct to us ...

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