“Perch” has a simple form – five couples with half rhyme similar to “the eagle” when only two lines rhyme. The metre is mostly anapaestic with some iambic feet. “A difficult birth” also has a loose iambic metre similar to the Eagle which has an iambic metre written with four feet in each line. Also in Perch some lines open with a stressed syllable.
All of the poems are written in first person and therefore shows that they are remembering an event in their lives. Since the poems are based on the poet’s own experiences and ideas, the first person narrative makes the poem more personal and therefore more emotional.
All of the poems describe nature as mundane or devastating. In “Perch” Heaney uses this effect to describe the perch as never moving like a soldier “holding the pass”. Heaney continuously describes the perch in a tedious way to emphasise his childhood view of “little flood-slubs, runty and ready”. In “The Field-Mouse”, Clarke describes vividly the result of their mowing on the mouse, “quivering mouse, “two sparks burning” and “curls in agony”. This is a symbol to show the result of war between her and her neighbour. Also in “A difficult Birth” Clarke again uses the idea of devastation to show how the sheep is feeling. The poet uses painful words such as “burning tongue” to emphasise the pain which the sheep and Clarke are feeling. Similarly in “The Eagle” the poet portrays the surroundings as old and unremarkable to make the eagle stand out amongst images. Tennyson describes the sea as “wrinkled” and the land as “lonely”.
Heaney links his creatures to the world of man to make the descriptions as realistic as possible. The poet refers perch to soldiers “holding the pass”. In “The Field-mouse” Clarke connects her animal to the world of man as a symbol of children and the devastation of war. Also in “The Eagle” and “A difficult birth”, the poets both use anthropomorphic words such as “He” “him” to accentuates how much they admire the creatures and to emphasise their love for the creature. In “The Eagle” Tennyson also uses the phrase “crooked hands” to link with the world of man and shows the strength of the eagle.
“Perch”, “The Eagle” and “The Field-mouse” all describe the habitat and environment of their chosen animal vividly. In the first two lines of “Perch” Heaney opens the poem with the places where the perch lives. He states that the perch lives “in the clear Bann River” to emphasise: the place is not made up. He also describes vividly the different places where he used to find the perch to create images in our minds. In “The Eagle” Tennyson describes in detail the place where the animal clings, to paint images in our minds of “azure world” and “mountain walls”. Also in “the Field-mouse”, Clarke describes what the field looked like before they found the mouse as “Summer, and the long grass”, “cloud of lime, drifting our land with a chance of sweetness” to create a warm feeling of summer. In the final two stanzas Clarke contradicts the intensive summer atmosphere by including pessimistic words to show the damages which humans have caused. She mentions, “Field lies bleeding”, “killed flowers” and “the field’s hurt” to create a negative feel of the field which the field-mouse is found upon. However in “A difficult birth” Clarke doesn’t describe the habitat or the environment because the most important idea in the poem is the giving of birth and the sheep and Clarke’s feelings. Unlike the other poems the environment is not needed to bring the animal to life or motion.
Clarke and Heaney have used unremarkable creatures: a lamb, a perch and a mouse, however they elevated them through their poems to give certain meanings. In “Perch” Heaney uses it to say that the perch may seem tedious and never moving from his childhood point of view but he sees it now from the animal’s perspective “under the water-roof”. The poet tries to show that the perch actually wants to escape the water and see what actually “flows and (the) steady go of the world”. However Tennyson uses a magnificent creature to show his spirit and ideas.
Overall, I prefer “the field-mouse” more than the other poems because of the wide range of poetic techniques used especially symbolism to create a moving narrative of the mouse and also the pessimism of an ordinary war/battle. Unlike the other poems Clarke also connects her poem with the real world, as the newspapers in the poem represent the events elsewhere in Europe.
