Victor has the characteristics of Aristotle’s five point tragic hero, he is an over reacher which obviously makes him floorless he has supreme pride “which is a reflection of arrogance and conceit. It seems to demonstrate superiority to fellow human beings and equality with Gods.” Victor plays God knowing what he is doing was wrong he does not even address the moral issues properly. Victor also has a capacity for suffering “he suffers because he believes in what he is doing and feels guilt and guiltless at the same time”, he says himself “I shunned my fellow creatures as if I had been guilty of a crime.”
Our feelings change frequently for both monster and Victor as the story develops we begin to feel anger towards Victor for abandoning his responsibility, then for the monster for killing a helpless child although we later find out that William encouraged the monster and brought it on himself, “my pa is a syndic-he is M.Frankenstein-he will punish you” this enrages the monster and he acts out of further rejection and his burning rage against Victor. Thinking that a young child would understand him “I could seize him and educate him as my friend and companion” he did not take pleasure in killing William “the child still struggled and loaded me with epithets which carried despair to my heart.” It is clear why the monster does this terrible deed, he has no hope left and is a tortured soul, revenge is the only way to make things right .Victor has to pay for what he has done, he needs to feel the pain and despair that fuels the monster, thus begins a vicious circle of revenge and redemption.
Shelley toys with our emotions throughout the novel, it is hard to decide exactly where to direct our anger and despair to. Insted we find ourselves taking turns to sympathise with both characters. However, we come to understand the Monster’s side of things when we hear him relate his tale to Victor; he explains what life has been like for him, and what events have taken place. Hearing the Monster’s side of things changes our whole perception of him. We come to understand that he was not bad from the start; it was the events in his life that moulded and shaped him into the corrupt and lonely creature that he has become.
The Monster’s first experience is rejection and he is given a very negative start in life being left alone to feel complete desolation, “I was a poor, helpless, miserable wretch; I could distinguish nothing; but feeling pain invade me on all sides, I sat down and wept.” He has done nothing wrong and does not deserve to be feeling these sorts of emotions, although it shows the reader that he is capable of thinking and feeling. The Monster starts to pick up aspects of life for himself as he has no maternal figures and learns simple concepts “I felt light and hunger.” He is a very unique and sensitive creature and learns to enjoy the world before he even experiences negative emotions “I first discovered that a pleasant sound, which often saluted my ears, proceeded from the throats of the little winged animals.” It is clear that the monster enjoys nature just as Victor does.
The monster then loses hope and comes to believe that nobody wants to perceive him “I escaped to the open country and fearfully took refuge in a low hovel.” The creature has tried in vain to communicate with people on several occasions, but is always rejected. We come to understand why the monster is the way he is as he begins to learn by observing the De Lacey family. Through reading novel such as Milton’s Paradise Lost he starts wondering about his existence and his isolation because of his apparent uniqueness “I was apparently united by no link to any other being in existence.” When the monster starts wondering about his origin we are compelled to feel empathy for him. It is obvious that he longs for some kindness, protection and company. These desires become even more evident when he reads the diary that Victor kept during hid creation, the monster learns that Victor was not at all happy with his creation “how can I describe my emotions at this catastrophe.” This makes the monster feel even more lonely and abhorred, as he realises that his own creator could not even stand to look at him or even give him a real chance before he cowardly ran away to hastily forget about what he had done. As reader we now begin to feel anger towards Victor, it is his fault that the monster feels like this, and it is not fair. Our sympathies lie in favour of the monster after all he was the one that was unjustly abandoned and left to feel isolated without a friend in the world.
Shelley then leads us to believe that the monster will be accepted by his benefactors the De lacy’s as the creature is accepted and reassured by the blind mans words “I am poor and an exile, but it will afford me true pleasure to be in any way serviceable to a human creature” the desperate monster is then beaten out of the cottage by Felix and his only hope of happiness is ruined. Deep down the monster is a kind and worthy creature “he
found his store always replenished by an invisible hand” It is only when he finds out that the family out of fear has permanently left the cottage that he starts to feel negative emotions such as hatred and revenge “for the first time the feelings of revenge and hatred filled my bosom, I bent my mind towards injury and death.” However these feelings are not directed towards the De Lacy family, but to Victor. But, as reader we should understand the monster’s point of view, Victor, ultimately is the cause of all his problems; he made the monster ugly then abandoned him, it is his fault that the monster does not fit in, this makes us more inclined to feel bitterness and resentment towards Victor, He should not have meddled with life if he could not finish what he had started.
Victor does feel some compassion when the monster relates his story “I compassionated him and sometimes felt a wish to console him, and agrees to the monsters requests “You must create a female for me” Victor gets the monsters hopes up as he starts to believe that he may have a companion to console him then just as his second creation his finished Victor selfishly destroys it before the creatures very eyes “do you dare break your promise? I have endured toil and misery” Victor shows his selfish nature at other times during the novel, when he is exhausted on Walton’s ship and the crew want to go home because it is too dangerous, he responds by accusing the men of cowardice and unmanly behaviour. If they were to abandon their expedition they would return home with a “stigma of disgrace” judging by his words he has not learnt anything from his ordeal with his monster. He apparently still feels that people should put their own desires above more important issues! Another example of this is the way that he deals with the monsters threats it is clear that the monster wants to hurt him and have his rightful revenge, but Victor assumes that it is only him that the creature wants to kill “I will be with you on your wedding night, such was my sentence, and on that night would the daemon employ every art to destroy me from the glimpse of happiness.” Yet it is clear that the best way to get to Victor is to harm the people that he loves as the monster has already witnessed Victor’s reactions towards their deaths, he does not realise this otherwise he would have been more protective of Elizabeth. Though very tragic for Victor and we should feel sorry for him when she is killed it is completely his fault, he was naive and utterly careless to leave somebody that he loves alone while a revengeful monster that is roaming around voicing threats. Victor had the chance to change everything before Elizabeth was murdered and was guaranteed that the monster would leave his family and himself alone for the remainder of their lives. He is just like Dr. Faustus who also had the chance to turn things around and repent the good angel states that it is “never too late” if Faustus will repent. The angel means if the Doctor repents of his evil decision to turn from God and make a deal with the devil for conjuring powers, he can still be saved. However, the bad angel on Dr. Faustus’ shoulder soon responds that it is “too late.” Similarly Victor does leave things too late yet he still had some relatives left worth saving like his father .Although it is clear that Victor has already lost everything and the people that he cherished the most. Our sympathies can now lie with either the monster or his creator as Victor is in a terrible predicament he cannot win either way incase the monster goes back on his word. Victor is torn between morals and his family it is a shame he did not consider that to begin with.
Another reason that we should sympathize with the monster is that he did not want or enjoy killing anybody and that the killings did not make him feel better he says that he was “the slave, not the master, of an impulse which I detested, yet could not disobey” The monster, just like Victor, reaches a point where no feelings are left except hatred. The monster is essentially the one going through the most torment he has to live with what he has done, seeing his creator dead on Walton’s ship he shows remorse and with an immense self hatred he tells Walton that he will “consume to ashes this miserable frame.” Nobody has won the novel ends and both die without satisfaction. The monster did not get a companion nor was he accepted, and Victor lost everything worth living for, they drove there selves to destruction, neither of them would give up as I stated earlier they created a vicious circle in which in the end consumed them both.
The monster went through his life lonely and abhorred the only kind moment he had was with the blind De Lacy which was soon ruined by Felix, he did not enjoy his life and was only giving his creator a taste of what he was put through, this essentially is why as reader I believe the monster deserves our pity as nobody should go through life that miserable and despised, he had nobody to care for him at least Victor experienced happiness.
Carla Wells