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As it sat there parked, the shiny new car - sparkling body - fresh crisp interior. An expensive and luxurious car (it would you make any man envious) parked in the driveway with the sun glinting off its red luscious shell. As the man stood there with a hose, bucket and sponge he wiped the sponge over the cars executive emblem which read 'Ferrari'. A man walked past admiring the car he stopped, 'what kind of job do you have!?!' he chuckled ''cos I got to get me one of those', the man washing the car grinned to himself as the man strolled off, he stopped for a moment and admired his car and looked at it from the end to the front as the soapy suds slowly slid down the sides, he thought to himself 'wow I'm lucky', he hosed down his car, put the sponge in the bucket and walked back into his house. His house - towering over the trees - stood there gleaming white with its blue shutters and doors, he opened his ...read more.

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He panicked and ran back into his house, slammed the door and then ran into his office, what he was looking for were the documents in which they stated the money he had borrowed, his office as cluttered as his thoughts at this moment, there were papers and files stacked up everywhere, he was rushing through them at some pace just throwing and shoving stacks around the room, he stopped for a moment and walked over to the wall and rested against it and then fell to the floor with his head in his hands in which he started to sob, suddenly he stopped and look up with a look of hope on his face, he stood up and rushed out of his office and then ran into his bedroom, he jumped up onto his large double bed in which a grand painting sat above, he picked the painting up off its small hook and what was being hidden behind it was the mans safe and what he had stashed in there was an assortment of things which ...read more.

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the house from where he had left the door ajar, the tall dark man reached for the door handle with his leather glove covered hand and cautiously opened the door, he walked in and closed the door behind him. A few moments later headlights turned into the driveway and lit up the whole house, the car turned into the garage and he got out a walked up to his front door, when he stepped inside he went into his kitchen and pulled out a gun a placed it onto the cabinet and then went into his living room, he walked over to the light switch and flicked it on, when he turned round he saw this figure in a black suit with leather gloves on cross legged sitting in his armchair, he flinched with shock and quickly went to take the gun out of his jacket, the figure in the chair said 'it's not there. It's in the kitchen, where you left it', the man replied 'w..w...who are you?!?!' ?? ?? ?? ?? Guy Gordon-Brown Original Writing 21/01/2009 ...read more.

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