Creative writing - Goodbye, Gregory.

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October 26, 2003

Lianne Chan 11 HK

Goodbye, Gregory

        I took a dollar out of my bag and dropped it into the pay phone that stood in the corner of the restaurant.  As I dialed my family’s phone number, I said a silent prayer of hope.  Hope that Gregory wasn’t in any pain.  Hope that his cancer had miraculously disappeared while I was out.

        “Hello?” It was Mrs. Saunders, our neighbor.

        Why is she there? I wondered.

“Hi, Mrs. Saunders,” I said, my heart lurching.  “It’s Madeline.  I wanted to check in and see how my brother was doing.”

        There was a pause.  “Your parents took him to the hospital,” she said finally.  “ I came over so that I could tell you when you got home.”

        “Oh no,” I whispered.  “Please, no.”

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        I didn’t hear the rest of what she said.  I hung up the phone and sprinted out of the restaurant, tears streaming down my face.  I didn’t stop to talk to any of my friends.  There was no time for questions or hugs or sympathetic gestures.  

        “I need to go to Memorial Hospital right away,” I told the cab driver.  “It’s an emergency.”  I’m on my way, Gregory, I told him silently.  

I stood by my parents as Dr. Ziegler came out to speak to us.  We had been sitting in the small lounge at the end ...

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