Creative Writing. I remember everything was calm except for the woman. She was unhappy, screaming

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I saw the bright, happy colours of the playground. The apple green of the meadow, the lively red of the moving seesaw, the sunshine yellow of the swings; these colours still remind me of my childhood and fun, carefree moments spent with my brother under my mother’s watchful gaze. I saw children and parents laughing, smiling, and talking, their children playing games nearby.

I remember: one woman – neat hair, manicured, smart coat, and one child – small boy, laughing, red coat.

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I remember everything was calm except for the woman. She was unhappy, screaming, her face twisted into a grimace. Nobody reacted. Nobody turned to look. From behind the gate, she screamed, but the people – I remember, they don’t listen to her, they can’t see her. I can hear the creaking of the swing, the chatter of the people, and the laughter and happiness all around. The sun glared down from the sky.

Shortly after this, everything changed, as quickly as a blink of an eye.

I heard a whizz, then another, something zinged past me and into the ground, ...

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