Creative writing inspired by I am Legend. I buried my hands into the steering wheel and slammed my foot onto the accelerator with determination; the car engine roared as if it had come alive, roaring like a mighty lion.

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My name is Robert Neville. I am a survivor living in New York City. I am broadcasting on all am frequencies .I will be at the south streets of sea port everyday at midday when the sun is highest in the sky .if you are out there, if anyone is out there I can provide food, I can provide shelter, I could provide security .if there’s any body out there anybody please you are not alone.

The sun pierced through the blanket of dark grey clouds covering the city, hitting against the dirty dull plastic that shrouded over the tall buildings which, surrounded the small dark narrow streets of New York.  A singular beam of sunlight shone brightly on to ground before me like a spotlight as thought the heavens were searching for me alone.  

I buried my hands into the steering wheel and slammed my foot onto the accelerator with determination; the car engine roared as if it had come alive, roaring like a mighty lion competing with the wicked wind that howled and screamed. The smell of burning rubber flowed through the cold air and the car flew like a bullet leaving its dark narrow chamber. Roads carpeted with weeds and grass as I began searching but could only hear the distant sounds of animals competing for survival, one sound was notably missing. The familiar sound of a human, any human was noticeably absent.  Birds could be seen flying everywhere, covering the sky with their majestic flight.

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I thought to my self “Am I the last person alive?” “Is anyone still out there?” Driving through the derelict streets I saw many cars in different colors scattered all over the place. Familiar shops like Subway and the cinema were abandoned and filled with darkness that bought death and fear to my senses.  I remember a time when people used to say that New York was a city that never slept.  As soon as you`d open the door of your house you’d see the color of the sidewalk and street matching to the tone of the sky. Which ...

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There are some moments of good description in this piece which help to create powerful imagery; however because of the errors that are made at a very basic level this piece would never be able to gain marks at the upper end. 3 Stars