Creative Writing - It was just like any normal day in the picturesque suburb of Massapequa, N.Y.

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Colin Eagle - 11F1

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It was just like any normal day in the picturesque suburb of Massapequa, N.Y.  It was in the middle of fall and leaves were scattered on people’s front lawns. It was a completely ordinary Sunday morning with people either going to the shops or just casually lazing around on their verrandahs, everyone leading a deceptively offhand style.  But all was not the same for the Rediros.  This family were living descendants and a modern replica of the infamous Gambino family.

Amongst the Rediros’ neighbourhood they present themselves differently and carry out their lives in a normal manner around home and try to show the residents they are average people living an uneventful, debonair life with a nonchalant attitude to life.

Most of the criminal activity comes from the father of the family, Al Rediro, he was so high up in the ranks of the elusive New York crime family he practically had his own army there was talk from amongst his father’s friends that Al Rediro was to become il capo di tutti cappi, the boss of bosses, godfather and chosen heir to Paul Castellano. Al Rediro made his money from owning various strip joints, bars, nightclubs, drug dealing, money laundering, prostitution and  owning New York’s biggest illicit stolen car ring.

Carlo was one of the many people visiting the shops that day; he popped along to get some

bread and milk.  But once he returned he was in for a shock, a very big shock.  He encroached his six bed-roomed well furnished house walking up the drive to notice the front door open; it all seemed a bit peculiar to Carlo for a neat family, leaving there front door open shows means there showing the neighbourhood into their lives.  He could view through the illustrious and grand front door and immediately spotted furniture upturned and out of place; the house looked surprisingly out of touch for the neat family.  He slowly peered his head inside and got more than he bargained for, he could blatantly tell someone had forced an entry quite simply ransacked the place, whether they had done anything else was for him to find out. He wondered around the ground floor and looked around, “hello, anyone there” he asked. He stood there looking helpless with a great big white, blank face as a sign of fear and desperation, wishing for a member of his family to reply.  Silence.

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Carlo began to step around in his hallway cautiously watching where his feet landed amongst the furniture left wrecked around his house.  He found nothing of use to him in finding his family, so he backed up against one of the walls and threw a book through the living room door on his left side, to show he’s there in case anyone was in there. Then carefully, very slowly, he gently moved his head so only one eye could see in, he saw nothing wrong but could only see half of the room. Then suddenly he plucked up enough ...

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