Creative writing-Mistaken Identity. For a while everything seemed normal- the rhythm of the engine, the flashes of the lights on the wings, suddenly. BANG!

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Mistaken Identity-

Eagerly, they all boarded the aeroplane. Couples, families and some businessmen – all-boarding for what should be an eleven-hour journey on a Bowing 747. A dinner and a breakfast, which probably wouldn’t be that tasty, yet was all procedure when you went on a long plane journey. Passengers sat in 2 to a row on the sides and four in the centre. The ceiling of the plane decorated with overhead lockers for hand luggage. To the front of the plane a mother clutched her young daughter’s hand. Both had wavy, coffee coloured hair that sparkled, in the reflection of the aisle lights. The young child had piercing sapphire eyes and flushed cheeks. Tears that had previously rolled down her face now smudged into her white, top’s sleeves.  Her mother wore a pair of tracksuit bottoms, which were embodied with the Nike logo, and a navy T-shirt that was slightly coating her trousers.

        “This is your Captain speaking – please fasten your seat belts, we are about to take off.”  The captain groaned in a low-pitched voice.

        Grins appeared on the faces of the travellers, finally, their holiday was about to begin. All the trays on the seats were up; seats were in original positions and windows covered. Gradually, the plane began to drive to the runway.  The speed picking up, the wind howling down the side of the plane and they were off, out in the air, high as a bird and gliding to the sun.

        Mid-way into the journey, after the boiled vegetables and cold meat dinners, the lights in the cabin had gone out. Heads rested on the blue patch pillows that bellowed out dust with every movement. Chairs hung back and legs flung forward. Eyes closed and no sound to be heard other than the slow pitch snoring of a few.

        The captain continued to drive the plane forward, he had turned the

Seatbelt sign off three hours ago, but could see on his radar that he was heading for something. Not quite sure yet what it was that was appearing, he turned on the seat belt light, as a precaution.

“This is your Captain speaking once again, and I must explain to you all that I have turned the seat belt sign back on, I don’t wish to frighten you but I believe we could be coming up against a strong wind.  So I have merely done this as a safety measure. I will inform you when I know more.”

        Belt buckles zapped together like magnets to metal. However, some had remained asleep throughout the whole announcement, so as a consequence had not secured their belts. The staff remained in their fold up seats, legs crossed, belts fastened and backs straight; like clones with their hair strapped back, tightly into a neat bun and their matching emerald suits.  Nobody knew exactly what was going on or what to brace their selves for they just kept hoping and praying that they would stay safe, not even the captain had a clear view of what was happening.

For a while everything seemed normal- the rhythm of the engine, the flashes of the lights on the wings, suddenly………. BANG!

For a minute everyone was still, then screams began to echo through the aeroplane, and steam realised from the wings. The height of the plane began to drop and it was going for a nosedive towards the ground. Things were being tossed around the cabin, because of the speed. The pilot desperately tried to snatch the stick up, but the plane continued to battle back. Frantically, the passengers placed their life jackets on – gas masks hurled down from the compartments above seats.  People rushing around until an abrupt smash! Smoke steamed around the cabin- people violently coughing, others screaming as there flesh was burnt, whilst they were still alive. Some were trying to yank loved ones from their sits, although it was an impossible task, as their bodies were so mangled in the metal frames of their seats; one lady tried to pull her unconscious husband from his chair, yet from the unexpected landing he had been forced back and through his chest the metal penetrated. She just gave up and lay there hugging him as he slowly passed- her tears in a cocktail with the blood that was dripping down his shirt.

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“Excuse me Miss but we need to get everyone out of the plane.” One of the cabin cru explained.

“No, what? … Do you just expect me to leave him? I can’t do that!”

“Well, I can’t force you, but I can’t jeopardise the safety of others in the time that I could hopelessly persuade you to come!” The lady groaned between the coughing, “everybody out of the exits as fast as you can the plane is likely to explode. If you see a child or elderly member that may need help please do help them. Come on get out!” ...

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