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Of Mice and Men Sequel

The autumn sun shone weakly through the cracks in the bunkhouse. George sighed into the pillow and slowly turned to face the others playing cards at the nearby table.  ‘It’s as if he hadn’t even existed.’ George thought angrily, ‘why they’re all playin’ and howling like a coupla dogs as if nothin’ ever happen.’ He shifted again to stare up at the rotting ceiling, once again he sighed. The bunkhouse seemed larger to George and everyone else so distant, it was as if there was a deep chasm between him and the others, even though they were only a few metres away.

“Sure you won’ join us?” Slim enquired; he took off his hat and examined it briefly. “Come on George. You have to face reality som’ time.”  By this time the rest of them had joined Slim and were mumbling words of agreement. Candy, stepped toward the bunk and said. “Yeah, go on Georgy- boy, I’s been four months and frankly I’m getting’ a bit worried ‘bout ya. We all are.” George stared at the ceiling with great interest. Finally he spoke, “He loved rabbits, jus’ wanted to pet ‘em tha’s all, never did no-one no harm. He used to ask ‘bout the ranch alla time, he was so excited.” He heaved one last sigh, one last sigh and got up.

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The faint lines under his eyes echoed sadness, deep brown pools reflecting emptiness. He rubbed his hand over his mouth and took one last sigh. Heaving himself upwards, the numbness in his legs subsided and feeling returned to his arms. There was a tingly sensation; it was as if he was re-born. The pools of emptiness full were now of knowing and determination. Slowly, he shuffled over to the bunkhouse door and stepped outside into the crisp autumn air.

“How’re you doin’ today?” asked Candy brightly.

“Doing jus’ fine Candy, workin’ for my last fifty bucks and ...

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