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Summary

Sam has been abandoned by his friends in an abandoned and ‘haunted’ house. He is trapped in the house and unable to escape. All the windows are boarded up and the doors have been blocked. The longer he stays in the house the more scared he gets. He then peeks through a small windows and sees three men with aces in their hands. They start calling for anyone in the house and begin walking around the house to look for anyone. Sam can hear the footsteps getting louder and louder. Sam then gets his foot stuck in a floorboard. The men start to get more suspicious and carry on calling. The voice keeps getting louder for Sam and he eventually breaks himself free. He now looks to break a boarded window and trips up when doing so. He is left on the dusty floor injured.

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April 1st; April fool’s day. Sam woke up very early and was awakened by the bright sunlight lighting up his room. The whistling of the birds caught Sam’s attention as he leisurely rolled over. He was looking untidy and was still half asleep when he picked up his sophisticated phone. His mobile had been bombarded with several useless text messages. It read ‘7 unread messages.’ He placed his phone back on his vintage dressing table and looked at himself. He was a tall teenage boy with scruffy brown hair; the average adolescent. He lay back in his comfortable and still warm bed. He felt slightly more awake enough to read his text messages.  Six of the messages were from his clingy girlfriend and one was from Peter. The last text from Peter absolutely bamboozled Sam. It read; ‘Meet me now at 1 Wilfred Lane. It is urgent, we have to talk.’ Sam was confused and pondered why it was so urgent.

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        As Peter is a good friend of Sam’s, he got up immediately and prepared him to go meet him. Before leaving he made sure he had his phone and his wallet in his pocket. He ate his breakfast unhurriedly and left the house. After playing with his phone fort a little while he realised that he only had a minimal amount of battery left. Sam did not worry about it. It was around 10AM and there was not a single cloud in the sky. The grass was green and the pavement was dry. Sam wore white shorts and a baggy ...

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