Creative Writing - The girl in black

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"An uninvited visitor knocks on my door on an evening in which I am home alone."

The task is to describe what happened that night in the form of a short story.

Peace and quiet. Finally! I'm home alone, my father has gone to stay at my grandmothers for a night over. He didn't take me. I hate going places. When I was younger, my mother took me everywhere; she didn't care how I felt. I remember, about seven years ago, my father and siblings were at a relatives house, as there was a wedding. My mother didn't want to go, and when she called my father and said she wanted to go now, he said he wasn't there because he'd been called for a business meeting to, east Manchester. My mother decided to entertain herself and went to an old ladies' Kitty Party. And she took me along with her! None of the other ladies bring anybody with them except their daughters, and I'm a boy! I was bored out of my wits, until something happened at the party. A girl died, just like that. The police said she caught