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THE KEEPER OF THE DARKNESS

Over looking the horizon, a figure, the Big Ben; ding ding ding…. .The Big hand hits the 8:00 mark.” Good morning London how are we doing this fine morning? Enjoy your breakfast and listen to the capitals …London’s coolest radio station around”. Running all about, little people like ants on duty, frantic looking at watches, finishing of bit if sandwiches. The cars make a racket coming in and out of everywhere and nature gets it fresh puff of the morning pollution. Within minutes the haunting darkness vanishes and comes along a warm invitation of a warm summer day. Whilst crowd of commuters fight to get into work, two don’t look half as motivated. These are two agents out on a mission, Keo and Tranis Marshal, watch your back.

A secret black box only to open with a correct number combination has been stolen from the marshal’s family and they want it back. The combination is unknown but if the box is opened the box will reveal its curse; the night shall commence forever and no light shall enter the eyes of the innocent beings of this unfortunate planet. The box is said to originate from an Indian tribe in south India from many centuries now. The box is under the interest of an undercover leader called Zen. The agents were sent a letter stating that they want 20 million pounds within 2 months or else the evil Zen will send out his monks and will force to kill the agents. Time has passed and they have less than 24 hours to get the rest of the money or they’ll have to pay the consequences.

(Ex mafia SAS soldiers, Keo and Tranis ride up to a bank. Approaching 120 mph the handbrake is pulled. ‘Screech’, the black mucielago skids just 2 metres from the bank)

‘Three’, Tranis stops the car, ‘two’, they unfasten their leather seatbelts, ‘one’ the car doors open upwards in a slow motion. Under his breath ‘ Come…the deed shall commence’ says Keo. ‘Keo remember, the ‘cough cough’ is the signal, you come…’ Tranis gets out of the car. Tall fellow with a dark cape covering largely his body, the deep voiced slow walking geezer. He plaices his hand on the revolver positioned just above his belt and smiles. Tranis walks into the bank. It is very full with grannies everywhere trying to get money. Tranis walks in slowly loudly tapping his feet along the ground.  He stands at the back of a queue closest to the entrance door looking straight ahead with no movement. He mutters to himself “ damn so many people, well the deed has to be done”.

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COUGH COUGH. Keo comes storming into the bank. In his hand is a large jet-black double-barrelled shot gun and looks as if he's very angry. “DOWN, GET DOWN, compromise and you shall live!” advises Keo to the people. Suddenly the whole bank turns quiet and the grannies turn so white as though they’ve just seen a ghost. They all get down and the sound of weeping is heard. Wack! Wack! “ You stupid man, go away,” insists a very threatening looking granny. “I haven’t got time for this”, whoosh, Keo shoves the shotgun in her face. “ Just kidding ...

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