Creative Writing : The Outsider

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Creative Writing : The Outsider

Tom gazed wonderingly around the room, taking his time as to not miss a detail. A rather high foot table in front of the redwood coloured three-seater sofa. It matched the walls of the room that resembled a log cabin in colour and certain aspects of the furniture. A grand fireplace cut into the centre of the wall furthest from the door, a single seat next to it and a television on an angle so it could be seen from the sofa and the seat.

The people were all around looking at Tom, the flickering glow of the fire made their smiles seem warmer and the atmosphere in the room was one of happiness and curiosity, as they couldn't seem to take their eyes from the youngster.

Tom sat silently, wanting not to disturb or upset them; he was slightly intimidated by the warmth of everyone here. The place from where he'd come was never like this. There were no smiles and there was no warmth at that place, security was never considered and privacy was a non-factor. Tom had watched many friendly faces come and go, many fierce looking ones too and when it came his time to leave Tom was glad.

Now he was in a room filled with love and an immense happiness that overwhelmed everyone, if they had tried the people could not stop their smiles. Tom decided he would take a look around the room in depth, no space was left unexamined, the room seemed huge to Tom, but maybe that was just because it was his first time in there. He noticed he was smaller than everyone else there as the stares followed his trail across the room. A large space between the TV and a large clock could provide refuge if things ever got out of hand, he prayed it would never come to that.
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"Are you hungry Tom?" The warmth of the soft female voice and the joy in her eyes made it difficult for him not to smile too, and he did smile. The woman was tall and seemed over-powering, but kind at the same time, it seemed she was in charge from the way the others waited with anticipation for her to say something. Tom liked it here; he hoped that this would become a permanent place for him to stay.

"Give him some food Mum." This was the voice of a youngster, an excited little girl, her hair ...

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