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English Creative Writing

To Die For

Chapter 1

“Ashley, Lucy and Kay are you listening to a word of this!” Exclaimed Mr. Kraugher angrily.

“Yes sir, we were just discussing the factors which prohibited the German’s from gaining control over Russia in 19…” Replied Lucy sounding surprised

“Oh that’s all right then girls!” And with a satisfied smile, turned back to the board and continued writing.

In fact we hadn’t been talking about that at all, it had been more along the lines of what we were doing at the weekend, but my best friend Lucy with her intellectual ability had nearly every teacher round her little finger. This didn’t really bother me though, and often worked to our advantage. Kay, Lucy and I had become best friends at the start of secondary school and had been ever since. As you may have gathered Lucy was the brainy one. She was a pretty girl but mostly disguised this by tying her perfect light brown hair up tightly and rarely wearing makeup. Kay was the opposite however; her pixyish face was always make-upped to perfection or slightly overdone. She had long curly strawberry blonde hair, which was often down and a perfect figure. She was the loud rebellious one of us. I was more the neutral one of the group. My long wavy brown hair was often straightened and my tan made me look very Spanish, but was the calm one of the group and compromised work with social events.

Kay began telling me and Lucy something about her new outfit when all of a sudden she stopped in mid sentence and starting staring towards the door. I turned to see what she was looking at then I saw Him, the most beautiful human being I have ever seen and I could tell from every girl’s reaction I was not the only one that thought this, as he walked casually into the classroom.

“Class this is Carl Frost, he will be joining us for the rest of the year, Carl take a seat.’ Mr. Kraugher exclaimed.

Carl hesitantly took a seat on the row in front of us. He looked beautiful even just from the back. Kay, Lucy and I all looked at each other and Kay smiled mischievously.

We decided to approach him at lunch the next day. He was sitting on a table filled with some of the popular girls we were friendly with all gazing at him admiringly but Kay gave them a look, which said back off. We then engaged in conversation and discovered he was not only good looking but had been sports captain at his old school and top set in all his subjects but didn’t boast about it at all just shyly admitted it. He was too perfect to be real. Kay couldn’t keep off of him and Lucy also looked fascinated. Afterwards we all had to go and Kay told Lucy and me she thought he liked her. As many boys did.

But to her surprise as we were leaving school he whispered to Lucy:

“You want to go out with me some time?”

Lucy had never been known for getting boys. She had had two relationships, one had lasted a two years and the other six months. Unlike Kay’s who’s usually lasted up to five days till she saw someone she decided she liked better. Lucy’s sudden attention from Carl caused a lot of friction between the two of them, and I would be lying if I said I didn’t feel at all jealous.

Chapter two

“You want a drink Kay?”

It was Sunday morning; Lucy was due to go out with Carl on their third date that night and Kay had popped over to my house for a brief visit.

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Kay didn’t answer.

“Aww come on hun, You’re not still annoyed about Lucy and Carl are you? We should be happy for her.”

“Why should we? Any boy would rather go for me over her, why should he be different?”

If anyone else would have said this, I would have laughed it off and told them to get over themselves. But I was used to Kay’s high self-esteem and it didn’t bother me.

“Maybe, but jealousy will only ruin our friendship and that is more important than any boy. You don’t want to hurt her do you?”

“Hurt her? ...

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