Creative Writing Two Groups Of Hoodlums And A Packet Of Crisps

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H/W        Two Groups of Hoodlums, and a Packet of Crisps 12 January 2009

Hunger. Raw hunger. I clutched my stomach in desperation, as it gave out another growl, signaling the end. I desperately reached into my pockets, hoping beyond hope that there would be the means of salvation buried deep in the crevasses of my jeans. I groped around, and my hand suddenly chanced upon a cool, metallic disc. My breathing faltered and my hand shook, as I slowly, and hopefully drew out, what was unmistakably a coin. I couldn’t believe my eye’s, so took out my glasses. I turned my eyes toward the coin, and my heart skipped a beat. But there was something decidedly awkward about the coin. I held it up and that’s when the light glinted on an inscription on the metal coin. MONOPOLY. It took a few seconds for me to digest this new setback, but when I did, tears of frustration threatened to leak through my eyes. I held them back, and in frustration threw the coin in a random direction. Wrong move.

“Oi, who threw that,” I heard someone yell. At first I was unsure as to who this person was talking to. But then I saw the dark-skinned man round the corner, with pure fury in his black eyes. Unsurprisingly, I was frozen with fear at the sight of this muscular man approaching. Confrontation was not an option, so I took the only feasible option, and ran. Now, at this point, it is hard to understand the pain I was going through. Aside from the crippling pain of my stomach, there was also the torture of my underfed muscles to contend with this, and I certainly didn’t need this new attack to deal with. Typically, I could have ran away from him without any question, my six foot, medium frame would easily outpace his significantly stockier build, however, my physical fitness was beginning to desert me. My black eyes were staring ahead intently, waiting for the next turn, or alley way into which I could dive into. My exhausted legs were threatening to give away, as the chase continued.

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“Listen mate, you’ve got one chance to stop, or else…,” he threatened. I accelerated one last time, and thankfully dived into an alley way that had appeared.

I wiped the sweat on my bushy brow, as I slowly came to a halt, but then I tripped. Someone had left a trip wire stretched out across the alleyway. My face scraped across the rough ground, and my tanned complexion was damaged. But strangely, I couldn’t care less. As my face had endured its short journey across the gravel, my eyes had spotted another metal disc. I tried to not give ...

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