Death of the American Dream

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Death of the American Dream

In Fitzgerald's The Great Gatsby, all the characters are, in one way or another, attempting to achieve a state of happiness in their lives. The main characters are divided into two groups: the rich upper class and the poorer lower class, which struggles to attain a higher position. Though the major players seek only to change their lives for the better, the idealism and spiritualism of the American Dream is eventually crushed beneath the harsh reality of life, leaving their lives without any meaning or purpose.

Tom and Daisy Buchanan, the rich socialite couple, seem to have everything they could possibly desire; however, though their lives are full of material possessions, they are unsatisfied and seek to change their circumstances. Tom, the arrogant ex-football player, drifts on "forever seeking a little wistfully for the dramatic turbulence of some irrecoverable football game"(Fitzgerald pg. 10) and reads "deep books with long words in them"(pg. 17) in order to have something to talk about. Though he appears happily married to Daisy, Tom has an affair with Myrtle Wilson and keeps an apartment with her in New York. Tom's basic nature of unrest prevents him from being satisfied with the life he leads, and so he creates another life for himself with Myrtle. Daisy Buchanan is an empty figure, a woman with neither strong desires nor convictions. Even before her loyalty to either Tom or Gatsby is put to the test, Daisy does nothing but sit around all day and wonder what to do with herself. She knows that Tom has a mistress on the side, yet hesitates to leave him even when she learns of Gatsby's devotion to her. Daisy professes her love to Gatsby, yet cannot bring herself to tell Tom goodbye except at Gatsby's insistence. Even then, once Tom pleads with her to stay, Daisy quickly changes her mind and ultimately leaves Gatsby for a life of comfort and security. The Buchanans are the ultimate examples of wealth and prosperity, the embodiment of the rich life of the American Dream, yet their lives are empty, unfulfilled, and without purpose.
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Though Myrtle Wilson makes an attempt to escape her own class and pursue happiness with the richer set, her efforts ultimately produce no results, and she dies, a victim of the very group she sought to join. Myrtle tries to join Tom's class by entering into an affair with him and taking on his way of living, but in doing so, she becomes vulgar and corrupt like the rich. She loses all sense of morality and is scornful of people of her own class. Her constant clothing changes signify her dissatisfaction with her life - she changes personalities ...

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The Quality of Written Communication is very good as well. There is evidence that the candidate is very adept with the use of English and a wide range of vocabulary which has been spelt correctly in all circumstance is used. There are no grammatical or punctuational errors either.

The Level of Analysis is of an extremely high standard. This candidate can expect to score a very high A grade for their response, which is both informative and insightful, picking apart the characters and their feelings towards their dreams from various parts of the novel. I think this candidate missed a trick when analysing Gatsby and not mentioning Carraway's conclusion of his character on the final page: "he [Gatsby] seemed so close to his dream that he could not fail to grasp it. But it was already behind him", which refers to what the candidate has wonderfully commented on - that the Daisy Gatsby wants no longer exists - she has changed and mutated from the immaculate vision he has cherished in his mind for five years ("no amount of fire or freshness can challenge what a man will store up in his ghostly heart"). Nonetheless, this is an exceptional essay showing a great depth of understanding of Fitzgerald's character and his writing style, with an astute use of adjectives to perfectly document their explanations, backed up with appropriate sources from the text. One major irk I have with this response though, is that the candidate has neglected to mention George Wilson. As stated in the fantastic introductory paragraph, it is not just the wealthy and the newly wealthy who have dreams - the lowest of the low in society also have dreams and whilst there is commentary and sufficient analysis on Myrtle Wilson, there should at least be an appreciation of what George represents - the dead carcass of the poor society - living on the ashes of the richer populations' squandering of luxuries, his physical fixation to the barren underbelly of New York shows how, even those most deserving of the American Dream; those who have slaved and slaved for years to provide not only for themselves, but for their family (Myrtle in this case, as George had been saving up to take her away from the Valley of Ashes, but she died the day before he was planning to tell her), will never change their position in society - Tom leads George on by making him believe he will buy his car, but he only visits to see Myrtle - this false hope again highlights the facetiousness of Tom Buchanan, but also the helpless... 'loyalty', if you like, the poor hold the rich to in order to believe, for a brief moment, that they could ever join them in luxury.

This is an exceptionally strong response to a question that asks candidate to discuss how the American Dream manifests itself in every one of the characters, as well as discussing how, regardless of how beguiling it's luminescence might be, all the dreams built upon it's foundation turn to rubble. The candidate makes a sensitive recognition of how dreams are presented in the novel, which characters dream of what and to what extent and cost do they achieve their dream, if at all. This is a very well-structured response, considering the dreams of three of the biggest characters in the novel.