Describe a haunted house.

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English Coursework – Original Writing

January 12, 2009

        DESCRIBE A HAUNTED HOUSE        

Number 9 deadly street – the place of tears, fright and fears! Anyone that walks into this place never walks back out, and that’s all we know about this deserted land.

It was Saturday 17th July, the day my life changed, and the sun was shining beautifully. I looked all around me and saw nature’s beauty showing off its magnificent colours.

I was nearing deadly street when I saw a change in nature; the sky began to turn grey and not long later did it begin to threaten all that was beneath it with its impenetrable lightning. The gates of 9 deadly street shot open giving me a sudden shock. I was scared, frightened, horrified and I had no idea what to do. As I dealt with the fear in my head, I felt something pulling me towards the house – Was it my curiosity? Was it the house? Or was it something else?-I really did not know.

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I was at the door of the house, as I lifted my finger towards the doorbell I heard a shriek from inside the house. It was like the house was calling me in. So I slowly opened the creaky door - it felt wet and dirty and the handle was hanging off by one screw. When the door was fully opened I felt a dreadful smell rush by my nose, it was like one hundred rotten corpses. The smell was disgusting. I did not want to keep on going but I felt as though I had no choice, so I ...

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