Describe a journey. Tossed in the back of a rusty van. Pitch black. Returning now. My skin was brutally bruised and peeling like a harsh sun tan.

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Tossed in the back of a rusty van. Pitch black. Returning now. My skin was brutally bruised and peeling like a harsh sun tan. I felt unusually weightless; something was beneath me; surrounding me to my neck. Frantic shrieks and useless pleas flooding from every direction; the confusion was overbearing. I unsealed one of my teary eyes and desperately wriggled; but success was out of reach. Murmurs; flickers of deep, patronising human voices seeped through the crack between the back and the driving seat. “Profit...”. “...69p each...”. “Crates...”

I unsealed my other eye and it took a while to adjust to the level of darkness. The rancid smell hit me like the blow of a drunken man in a bar fight. Suddenly the van halted. I slipped backwards and tumbled into the metal doors. My family told me this would happen; I remember the disturbed look on their face when informing me of this. Nevertheless, I never anticipated it would occur so young.

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The murmurs grew closer as they stepped out of the van and slammed the door. Rough voices met by tough movements. They jerked open the back doors and light flooded through and blinded my sight. Ironically, I wouldn’t call it “blindness”; just one glimpse struck me with realisation.

Thousands of them; of us, sitting in crates waiting for our turn.

They yanked us out, crate by crate outside an unusually large building. We had no identity. We never spoke to one another. They were met by other bodies all dressed in the same uniform.

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