Describing a place - The Jamboree

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Rachael Hill                10RW

        English coursework 2007

The Jamboree

I lifted my head off the cool glass and opened my sleepy eyes, wondering what had woken me. I lifted my legs off the seat and rummaged in my bag for my drink.

I found it and tipped back my head to let the warm water trickle down the back of my dry throat. Pulling it away from my mouth, the sky blue background of the bottle emphasised the white writing that read ‘Jamboree’. The words swam inside me as excitement surged upwards, breaking my moist lips into a smile.

        “We’re here!” I heard someone shout in delight. I turned my attention outside as the engine roared viciously uphill. The ground levelled and daylight filled the coach. As my eyes adjusted to the brightness, I focused on my first sightings of the Jamboree and I shall never forget it.

The green colours of our natural surroundings were enhanced by the strong sunlight. Colourful flags rippled in the breeze, greeting  us in different languages. The trees swayed and danced, their leaves rustling together.

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        The coach park was like a never ending road. The narrow lane was made of small uneven stones that crunched together underneath the wheels.  There were people, lots and lots of people, from everywhere. People from Japan; America, Canada, China, Europe, Egypt, India, all over the world!

I saw scouts from a foreign country, doing a formation of salutes and turns, all perfectly timed and level with one another. I can remember making eye contact with one boy as he stood with his hand against his dark hair and saluting at him, making him smile.

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