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16/09/08                         The Traffic Jam

Just as I approached the beanstalk of a shopping centre, people were rushing in and out like particles. People of all ages were present from the old and frail to the young and fresh. Over my right shoulder were two hooded teenagers…

    I simply strolled off with no intentions in handing any valuables over. Luckily a distraction swerved around the corner of the street, a damaged Vauxhall which utterly failed at an attempt to seem ‘hip’. Irritating rave music louder than an ear structure could handle…

     Out came a middle-aged short beer-bellied gnome type man. He seemed to be wearing a shirt with fine Hawaiian pattern stitching and tight denim jeans with a buckle labelled ‘phresh’, portraying the message that either he never attended an English class or that he was a gangster-to-be; perhaps both.

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     People were backing away as if they were intimidated by him pouncing towards his prey. Within a split-second, he roared fiercely whilst forcing his size 4 Nike trainers into the stomach of what seemed to be his provider of heroin.

     Now turning my head back to the immense shopping centre, I seeped through the conjunction of people.

     There were mainly women ahead with heaps of shopping bags in one hand whilst pushing a baby’s buggy with another. At this precise moment I was uncertain.

Was I stuck in the middle of a jungle ...

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