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My time on the “Devil’s Ship”

“ Right, kids bed come on, it’s getting late. What story do you want tonight?” asked Amelia.

“Granny, we want your story” Jenny said excited.

“ Very well then it all started when I was fourteen. My mother would always send me out every morning before I go to school to fetch 2 buckets of water. But this day was different it took me 4 hours each way and when I reached the water there was no queue and while I was pondering where everyone was I was caught in a net. It was terribly uncomfortable and then we were thrown into the back of an army truck. They drove us for what felt like hours, up steep hills and bumpy terrain with the hot sun beating down on us.

                 We finally reached our destination which was my favourite beach but we weren’t here to splash in the water or make sand castles as we found out straight away. We were packed into a huge ship but we had a very small part of the ship and there were hundreds of us. It was really dark we could hardly see in front of us but you get used to it after a while. All you could hear was chains clink, children and mothers crying late into the night, elderly well you couldn’t hear them because they just lay there silently thinking about what they would have done in their lives if they had known what was going to happen.

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                 It had been a whole week since we had been caught, I knew that because I kept track how many times I saw the moon up. I was really starting to miss home I wondered if my family were looking for me but there was a part of me that thought they didn’t care about me. I hated the fact that I was so far away from them, I missed everything the smell of mum’s cooking, the breeze in my hair, the feeling of the sand running between my toes, the sound ...

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