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Year 10 GCSE coursework: Descriptive writing

I cringed suddenly as hunger struck through my body like a lightning bolt. I grasped the golden brown loaf of bread, incarserated in a thin sheet of plastic. My fingers almost sunk into the loaf as the transparent sheet made a crinkling noise. I ripped it off quickly trying to save it from suffocation. Success. It appeared to glow magically. I pulled open the gleaming white finished door of the refridgerator. It screamed loudly in pain when I tried to expose it to the bright effulgence of my undersized kitchen. I struck my arm out for the silver rectangle that reflects the light into my eyes. I winced unexpectadly. I grabbed it; it was cold and bumpy to touch. I placed it down on the creamy coloured table. I pushed the gleaming white finished door away from me. This time it screamed for joy to be returning back to its dark and cold home.

 I tugged at the subtle silver lid by the tab. It tore apart in three stages. The first few centimetre, then the next, and then finally, the rest.

 It revealed an even shinier silver coat. The tab was in the corner; I tried to grip it with my fingers. My fingers slipped off the glistening tab repeatedley. Irritated I got the black handled shiny silver knife and sliced through the edges of the clothing for the top of the rectangle.

It crackled as it curled into a mini pair of binoculars in the middle of the rectangle. I picked it up and threw it into the tall grey-blotched bin. My index finger and thumb were left with grease smeared on them. I pinched the small bright pink tablecloth that lay next to me to get rid of the unwanted mess that would ruin my skin if they got in contact with it! Now a creamy yellow brick of margarine was revealed.

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 I walked at a casual pace to the cupboard and pulled the small dark brown cupboard door towards me. Silence. I reached for what looked like a plain white plate with my other hand. My hand turned into a crocodile’s mouth as it snatched the flat saucer from the cupboard.

 The quite plate had a delicate pattern of flowers and little brown rabbits eating some bright green grass around the rim.  I pushed the cupboard door away from me with my free hand. Silence again. I walked back to my work place. I settled the plate down next to ...

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