Descriptive writing He ran and ran as fast as his legs could carry him. Sarah had been left behind to be swallowed up by the darkne

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        He ran and ran as fast as his legs could carry him. Sarah had been left behind to be swallowed up by the darkness, this pained Daniel as he and Sarah had been a couple for almost three years, he couldn’t turn back to save Sarah otherwise he would be brutally bashed to death with an axe.

        Daniel had found a place to hide and dived into it. He lay still in the giant shrub. The sound of thudding footsteps was getting louder; meaning that the mass murdering monster that was chasing him was extremely close. The thudding stopped directly in front of Daniel. He look up a fraction to see two dirty, mangled feet that were covered in cuts and bruises and many scars, he looked up a bit more to see the face off the monster that had killed so many innocent people. The monsters nose was sniffing around as a dogs’, as if trying to pick up the scent of Daniel, the thing paused for a moment then continued running.

        After about ten minutes: Daniel quietly heaved himself out of the overgrown bush to find that he had a severe slice down his left arm; with the chunk of skin still dangling half still attached to him. He now felt the pain; it was so immense that he had to tear the rest of the skin from his arm. He screamed in agony, not just because of the pain and his mutilation, but because he knew he was never going to see Sarah again.

        Sarah opened her eyes, she started coughing and spluttering, dust was everywhere after she had fallen through the flight of stairs. She got up and looked around, there was nothing but darkness. Sarah looked around for a second time and saw a beam of light coming from what looked like; under a door. Sarah’s initial reaction was to scream, but she thought it would be wise not to give away her position, after all, she didn’t know where the psycho killer was. She limped towards the door and felt for a handle until she grabbed and turned something that had touched her hand. The door opened. It lead Sarah into another derelict room, but with a little bit of light that helped her to see.

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        Sarah thought that she was somewhere near the front door; as she, somehow, knew where to go. Suddenly it dawned on Sarah that this was the house that she grew up in as a child. She started to reminisce about her childhood and how her life used to be before she lost her parents in a major house fire. This was the house that Sarah’s parents had died in. It all added up to Sarah now: the house fire that killed her parents had started on the stairs almost ten years ago when she was only eight years old. She ...

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