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The Dentist

             I enter the building and walk over to the elevator; I push the up button and patiently wait. The elevator door promptly opens and I get in. I push the button with two on it and the doors close. Up I go.

      Once on the second floor I exit the elevator and I can smell the mixture of wintergreen-flavoured toothpaste and bleach out in the hall even before I go into Dr Adelson’s office. As soon as I open the outer door, the blast of cool air from the air conditioner hits me in the face making me shiver all over.

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      I walk in and add my name to the list on the sign in sheet. Harriet, the grey haired women behind the white frosted glass widow, sees me and lets me know the doctor will be ready in a minute. While I wait for the dental nurse in her crisp white uniform and sharp square spectacles to call out my name I look round and think what a coward I am as I see children with joyful, bubbly, faces looking at me. My face by now is now the colour of a great big red balloon ready ...

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