Diary of Aeneas

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 Zoheb Hussain 4AMC                        Diary of Aeneas

Day One:

              We had just lost sight of Sicily and with my 20 ships we were happily heading for deep waters when suddenly without any sign a thunderous storm arose, my limbs had grown cold and weak and I had wished I had died in the battle of Troy so I would have been remembered and I wondered if a god or goddess had cursed us with this storm. Our oars snapped and our bows lurched round and we see a ship held poised on the top of a wave, me and my men fear for our fellow men’s lives. We see three ships tossed into rocks and sub merged under water and we see trusty Orontes ship sucked down into a whirlpool as a huge wave crashes down on it and his fleet tossed overboard head first and the sea littered with Trojan treasure but as this is happening suddenly the storm in an instant calms down and I wonder if a god has taken pity on us. Suddenly the sun reappeared and the clouds cleared from the sky, worn out we hurried to the nearest land and turned towards Libya’s coast because there was a natural harbour where a pair of great rocks raise threateningly

 into the sky with still and safe water. It is shadowed by a dark wood and ahead of it was a cliff with stalactites hung from it. We left our seven ships of the 20 which survived here in a cave where an anchor was not needed and my men with relief stretched their limbs encrusted with salt as we sat on the shore where Achates lit a fire fed with dry twigs and whipped up the flames with kindling. Then as tired as we were we got out the corn damaged in the storm and the utensils for baking so we could dry this grain in front of the fire and so could grind it into flour. While my men did this I climbed onto a rock to get a view of the sea in case I could see any Trojan ships like the storm tossed Antheus or Capys but there was no ship in sight my heart was filled with grief for my stranded men, but then my eyes caught sight of three stags rambling across the shore and behind them a whole herd in a line browsing through the dunes. I steadied my self with a bow and arrow that Achates carried and then I shot down the leader and as the rest ran I kept shooting until seven bodies lay on the ground. I distributed these between the seven ships and then I also shared out the casks of wine, which noble Acestes had given us as we left the shores of Sicily. Finally before we lay to rest I said something to soothe the sorrowing hearts of my men, I said to them that they had been through much worse as they had escaped the mad fiend Scylla and that they had also survived a day in the cave of the Cyclops so I told them not to give up and to save themselves for the good things to come.

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Even though these had been my own words I was sick with anxiety but I put on a confident look and I buried my grief deep in my heart and my men prepared the banquet and ripped the hides off the stags disclosing the flesh and cut the meat into chunks, the food gave my men back their energy and they spread themselves on the grass filling themselves with old wine and venison and after the feast was cleared and they were satisfied they passed the hours talking and wondered if their stranded comrades were alive dead or still dying ...

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