Digging- Poetry Commentary.

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Digging- Poetry Commentary

Digging is seen as a tradition to the poet’s family for many generations, as he expresses his feelings related to the past, present and future.  Not only does he speak of digging literally but also digging metaphorically; going down deeper to find truth and history of the family.

We immediately discover his liking for writing, “squat pen rest; snug as a gun”.  This simile suggests words are just as harmful as bullets, and that a writer has as much freedom in expressing their feelings even in such a simple simile told in monosyllabic words, conveying strength and power.  Instead of describing and confining to the room he sits in, he turns his attention to the outside world where he sees his father undergoing the known tradition.  This displays his curiosity and perhaps his guilt in resorting to playing with a pen and not a spade.

We learn of his admiration for his father, who puts much effort into producing potatoes.  “Bends low, comes up twenty years away,” suggests his father is of an old age but there is this continuous movement feeling, knowing he has performed this task for many years.  Perhaps it also implies he is still full of energy like when he was younger and still digs at the same dedicated standard.  This is followed on with “stooping in rhythm through potato drills,” emphasizing the tedious, monotonous ritual, carried out for twenty years.  Drills as well as meaning digging, also defines military line-ups and implies the self-discipline involved to carry out this tiring work.

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Coarse boot nestled on the lug” is an example of antithetical juxtaposition.  The harsh sound of the boot contrasts with the warm inviting nest on the lug, as if to say the spades only purpose is to perform the tradition regardless of the type of individual.  The fourth stanza recalls positive images of digging and even relates to the readers touch sensitivity, with the potatoes cool hardness in our hands.  The strong, healthy potatoes can be contrasted to the later description as “soggy peat”, this in relation in his memory as he recalls the stages of digging.  The stanzas are ...

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