Dominic was a sixteen-year-old; he lived in a council house in Stockport.

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English                                                        Philip Matthews

Dominic was a sixteen-year-old; he lived in a council house in Stockport. A few blocks away lived Mary she was fifteen and lived in a large detached house. They had been going out with each other for nearly a year now.

        On August the 17th exactly a year from the day they started dating, Mary told Dominic that she doesn’t like him anymore and that it was over. Dominic had never been a calm person; he was like a volcano waiting to explode. As soon as Mary told him he erupted, she had told him over the phone as she knew he would throw a tantrum, she thought the worst thing he could do was hang up – which he did. After 5 minutes of finding out Dominics house was trashed.

        When Mrs Baxter returned from work to see her house smashed up. She hit the roof! She knew it was Dominic as he had done things like this before. “Dominic Baxter get down here this instant!” Dominic was up in his room planning his revenge against Mary. Soon his mum stormed into his room “What’s going on Dominic, what’s the meaning of this?” Dominic ignored her “Dominic!” Dominic slowly turned around to face her, his face full of anger. His voice made the house shake “SHUT UP BITCH!” His mum was horrified, she didn’t say anything, she just turned and left.

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        Two days later a daily newspaper headline read ‘GIRL 15 FOUND IN BACK ALLEY HALF DEAD’ Dominic read on, as he read an evil smile came across his face, it was the smile of success. But that smile was soon to be turned upside down.

        On September 1st the news paper headline read ‘GIRL BRUTALLY BEATEN IN ALLEY PASTED AWAY LAST NIGHT.’

“What have I done?” Dominic screamed outloud. As he read he broke into tears.

        “I didn’t mean to do that” He explained to the police officer “I didn’t think I could, I only hit her once with a piece of wood”

        Scientists had said she had been hit with something hard ...

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