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Don't get me started on buses! I think the local government should take a greater responsibility to do something about the unreliable buses.

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Buses! They are red to start with. Don't get me started on them because they are horrendous. I am a little obsessed with buses; the reason for this is they are so unsatisfactory. I might be a little over the top but they just drive me around the bend. Don't you agree with me? I think the local government should take a greater responsibility to do something about the unreliable buses. Let me tell you why! I despise of buses. So there you are standing in the cold in the rain at a bus stop and you look at when your bus is coming, it says 13: 05. So you think ok I can wait 10 minutes. 10 minutes later you look at your watch, it says 13:15 but the bus is not here. You think it is around the corner. ...read more.

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They are always chewing gum, which end up on the seat or floor of the bus. Also the food and drink that they bring on the buses they drop half of it on the floor, which give the buses the smell of rotten old food. The company that make the buses should use some of their profit to clean the buses on a regular base. Would you like to drive a car with chewing gum on the seat and a smell of stale food? Buses are not just the problem the drivers are to. What is fast and hit everything in it way? Bumper car do. The drivers of this big, wide, red, thing think they are at a fair ground playing with bumper car, when they are driving the buses. ...read more.

Conclusion

The buses are only dirty because it is only human to drop crumbs. Also the drive cannot see cars that are in the blind spot so they pull out and nearly hit you but there are bus lanes on the road so the buses do not really need to be late. Also, the bus should be clean every day which means that the bad smell would go. The driver should add more mirrors if they cannot see you. People should not be allowed to bring food and drink on the buses. I believe the way the buses should be treated better is if the children over 11 would have t pay for their bus journey, which would mean the teenagers would respect the bus. Also there should be more bus so people do not have to wait very, very, very, long for a bus. The company should clean the buses every day. Doesn't that seem fair? ...read more.

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