Eleven Minutes

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Eleven Minutes

        One thousand feet above the jagged mountain base, a solitary cable car was grasping to stay suspended. The car was aged, no real colour, a base coat of white plagued by rust. The inside was dark, cold and claustrophobic- claustrophobic in the sense of being ensnared; no escape.

        The ancient cables above were decrepit. The car struggled to fight the abrasive mountain weather. Trembling, the car shuffled upwards. Blackout.

        All power was lost. The car jolted as it came to an abrupt stop. With nothing to resist the ferocious winds, the car began to sway. To the inhabitants inside, the jagged rocks below were becoming more apparent by the second.

Asif, an Asian adolescent began to panic, his breathing heavy; his movements sharp. Sweat began to break on his forehead. Anxiously, he approached the side of the car. He felt isolated as he peered out across the horizon. Alone in the vast wilderness of the world. Gradually his eyes flickered and looked below. He could just make out the tips of the rocks. The rocks were veiled under the approaching mountain mist. Creak. Asif's head flung towards the window in the ceiling, the window below the wheels that clung onto the cables.

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The ancient cables were weakening. Two minutes now since the loss of power. Groans began to echo around the car. The bodies looked around. Their insignificant lives beginning to cease; losing hope. No rapid movements, only the unhurried movement to peer into the mountain mist. A feeling of acceptance promulgated around the car: acceptance of destiny.

Asif though, was different. A typical youth fuelled on testosterone declined to accept. He calmly and cautiously scoured the car for an emergency procedure or something that could aid his escape. It was an arbitrary decision, but it was his natural instinct.

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