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GCSE: English Language
6,606 GCSE English Language essays
- Marked by Teachers essays 33
- Peer Reviewed essays 131
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Write an essay to be published on your school website about this dilemma with reference to one experience you had when using the Internet. Discuss what should be made public and what should remain private,
5 star(s)On the whole this is a very well written essay. It is well-structured with an effective opening, a logical sequence of ideas and a strong conclusion.
The vocabulary is appropriate…- Essay length: 739 words
- Submitted: 30/12/2011
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Marked by teacher:
Melissa Thompson
10/04/2013 -
Reviewed by:
sydneyhopcroft
04/04/2012
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Write a letter to a headteacher persuading him/her that all students should take part in at least one hour's physical activity every day.
5 star(s)An excellent letter written to persuade. Well written and logically structured, it includes tripling, repetition, rhetorical questions,personal case studies and statistics.
Vocabulary is well chosen for maximum effect and varied…- Essay length: 402 words
- Submitted: 04/04/2012
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Marked by teacher:
Katie Dixon
29/04/2112
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Don't get me started on... Bullying
5 star(s)An excellent piece of persuasive writing which uses rhetorical devices such as questions, imperatives, listing, tripling and real case scenarios to create a powerful essay.
Well planned and uses varied…- Essay length: 1019 words
- Submitted: 20/03/2012
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Marked by teacher:
Katie Dixon
29/04/2112
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A Foreboding Night. Ian sat on the curb, his hands buried deep inside the pocket of his jeans.
5 star(s)*****
This is a very good piece of descriptive writing which is well controlled throughout.
There is some excellent imagery particularly personification, syntax is varied for dramatic effect and the…- Essay length: 656 words
- Submitted: 14/03/2012
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Marked by teacher:
Katie Dixon
29/04/2112
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Compare how the past reveals feelings about a place in Nothings Changed with the ways another poet reveals feelings about a place or places in one other poem.
5 star(s)A very good essay. Detailed and perceptive analysis of poetic techniques used by both poets.
Accurate and thorough analysis of language using correct poetic terminology.
Most comments are supported…- Essay length: 1729 words
- Submitted: 04/01/2012
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Marked by teacher:
Katie Dixon
09/02/2012
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Morning of the execution. Within a few hours, her brother would be executed for something he hadnt even done. The injustice of it all! Her eyes prickled and fire burned inside her.
5 star(s)An excellent piece of creative writing. Techniques are used superbly to create drama and tension.
Similes, phonological devices, varied syntax, metaphors and description are all skillfully used to create a…- Essay length: 2080 words
- Submitted: 26/12/2011
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Marked by teacher:
Katie Dixon
10/02/2012
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Supermarket Description - Sleek, automatic, glass doors slid smoothly open, only to divulge a cacophony of noise.
5 star(s)*****
An excellent piece of descriptive writing which shows a wide vocabulary, effective use of onomatopoeia, figurative language including original similes and a skilful use of varied syntax. The senses…- Essay length: 904 words
- Submitted: 06/10/2011
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Marked by teacher:
Katie Dixon
29/04/2112
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Describe a person you admire. Though I have lived a colourful and varied life, the event which had the greatest effect on my well-being was the day I came of age, for it was on this day that it had been arranged that I should be told that my father was
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This is an excellent and extremely funny piece of writing. It is original and quirky and the writer has created an ironic voice which is consistently maintained.
This reads…- Essay length: 521 words
- Submitted: 26/09/2011
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Marked by teacher:
Katie Dixon
29/04/2112
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(Descriptive Writing) Describe the sights and sounds of a market place
5 star(s)This is a very good essay, requiring only a little editing to make it excellent. The simple narrative maintains interest and escorts the readers through a series of scenarios, effectively…
- Essay length: 804 words
- Submitted: 19/10/2009
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Marked by teacher:
Jeff Taylor
26/04/2013
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Narrative essay 1
5 star(s)A highly effective and descriptive essay, demonstrating skillful use of language to convey emotion. The horror and despair are cleverly conveyed and the depiction of the fire as a "beast"…
- Essay length: 679 words
- Submitted: 29/04/2009
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Marked by teacher:
Jeff Taylor
26/04/2013
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