Miller has created much tension in the scene when Eddie goes to Alfieri in act 1. Firstly Miller uses Alfieri to enforce the dramatic scene by, telling the audience what he feels Eddie has done. “His eyes like tunnels; my first thought was that he had committed a crime”. This creates the thought of Eddie doing something terrifying which the audience doesn’t know of. The use of simile emphasises the drama within the moment. It also shows that Eddie is one minded and is not prepared to change his way of thinking towards Rodolfo. Throughout the scene Eddie will interrupt Alfieri whenever he tries to give advice. Then finally Eddie to listen Alfieri “well, they entered illegally. Oh Jesus, no, I wouldn’t do nothin’ about that, I mean-”. Here without a thought Eddie decides that it is unacceptable to tell on the immigrants. “Oh Jesus” is used in Eddies speech as it emphasises that this is undesirable as it not in their culture to do such a thing. However this does cause the audience to suspect something may happen further along in the play involving this event. It has cropped up in the play once before when speaking to Beatrice and Catherine. Towards the end of this scene we realise that Eddie has feelings towards Catherine. He has too much love for Catherine and he is warned by Alfieri about this. “He’s stealing her from me!” “(Furiously) what’re you talking about, marry me! I don’t know what the hell you talking about (pause)”. This demonstrates how Miller uses the scene to convey the true relationship between Eddie and his niece. Furthermore the use of the stage direction “(furiously)” suggests that Eddie is being more defensive and stressed about the situation. The author empathises this by using dialect. Another point is in both dialogues exclamation marks have been use suggesting Eddie is shouting.
Dramatic tension is built up in Act 2, as Eddie then comes into the apartment after he has been drinking. Miller has cleverly used dramatic irony to raise the tension towards the critical moment. “he mounts the stairs. He enters the apartmment, looks around, takes out a bottle from one pocket, puts it on the table. Then another bottle from another pocket, and a third from an inside pocket”. This is then comparable to the following outrageous actions of the uncle towards his niece. “He reaches out……to…….each waiting for the others mood”. The stage directions are effectively short to create more build up to the sudden moment. Here you can see Eddie is uncontrollable over his behaviour and is trying to show his feelings for his niece. Many people may interrupt this is different ways, and the audience’s impression of Eddie are completely changed from sympathy to one of disgust. In addition to this all the sentence length are short and snappy. This shows there is direct speech to one another, only important phrases are said or used. Also many of the sentences are finished with an exclamation mark. This provides the information to the reader that the characters are shouting. Additionally this links to the key moment made before, about Eddie having too much love for his niece.
The final scene is the outcome of the previous dramatic moments. This scene has been created very skilfully by the play write. Alfieri has the begging speech and creates a sense of darkness and betrayal. “But I will never forget how dark…….to…….. had really happened”. Also the phrase “his eyes like tunnels” has already been used before in the play creates the sense that Eddie has not changed in the way of his thinking. He is still determined after what he has done to make sure Rodolfo and Catherine do not get married to one another. Alfieri also tells Eddie what he has done is unnatural and is also directly warning him not to do anything stupid. “When the law…….to…… put it out of your mind! Eddie!” the pauses and the stage direction slowly build up and increase the tension. The sentence length in much longer and complex, however with many more pauses to create time to think and respond. As the readers take in this information Eddie then suddenly deceives the culture and the society he lives in. He calls the immigration bureau.
There are many ways Miller has created dramatic tension/effect. Also it is used throughout the text of the play. Without this Miller wouldn’t have been able to achieve the suspense and the drama in the play, to make the story line interesting.