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The unsuspected traitor

The bells rang and three men Dave, Dan and Beck came barging out of the bank. Dave, Dan and Beck were all heavily built brutal men. They were twice the size of an average adult and they were armed to their teeth. Dan had a semi automatic shotgun in his hands and a Walther P99 (a semi automatic handgun) tucked in his belt. Beck had an AK-47 and Dave had a long and mean M15 in his huge arms.

“Go, go, be quick!” screamed Dave at Bruce as they jumped into the car.  

Bruce who was sitting on the driver seat of a two thousand and seven black BMW M5 slammed his big foot on the accelerator and the car revved well above six thousand RPM. The chase had begun. The black BMW M5 with four big guys seated in it was racing in the front, speeding well over the limit and 5 flashing police cars followed behind.

After turning a few corners Bruce thought he had lost the police and slowed his speed down a little, but then he could hear the police sirens once again. It was tough driving in the congested city center but Bruce was the right tool for the job. He quickly dropped the car to 1st gear and slammed his foot once again on the accelerator. After dodging all the traffic Bruce successfully reached the motorway, (which wasn’t busy). The police cars were close behind and by now three more police motorbikes had joined the cars.  

“Oh no, these guys are never gonna give up,” remarked Beck.

“Shoot ‘em, now!” commanded Dave.

The windows from all three sides went down, Dave, Dan and Beck rose out of their sides and started shooting at the police. Dave with his long and mean M15 held in his massive arms shot the drivers of two police cars going side by side. The cars collided with one another and went up in flames. Dan shot two police on motorbikes on the head with his powerful semi automatic shotgun and the motorbikes uncontrolled spun off the motorway. Bruce saw more police cars and motorbikes heading towards them and knew this meant trouble. He suggested to his friends that they should get in and he will try to overrun the police.

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BANG! A bullet hit the back window of the BMW M5 and all three of them dropped back into the car and Bruce once again revved the car and left the police cars behind. The police cars could never compete with the BMW M5 in speed. After a long drive they stopped outside a big bungalow. Bruce pressed the button on a remote and the garage door opened with a buzz. Bruce parked the car while the others went in the bungalow.

“It was a bloody tough day today,” remarked Beck. “The police just increase in number and seem ...

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