"Everything is breaking up. I don't know why." Ralph - What is going wrong on the island and why?

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Monday 11th October 2004

“Everything is breaking up. I don’t know why.” - Ralph

What is going wrong on the island and why?

The group of evacuees, all boys roughly aged between five and twelve, is dividing into two sets of people, each following either the ideal of civilisation, or the ideal of savagery. At the beginning of the novel, every boy, conditioned by society, was following the ideal of civilisation, that being the only ideal they knew. However, as the novel progresses, the ideal of savagery, hidden in every human heart which is the centre of this allegorical novel, begins to grow and surface, and soon more and more boys are falling prey to their very basic, primal instincts and urges; hunting animals, forming tribes, painting themselves and losing all vestiges of societal rules. This regression is what Ralph, a firm advocate of the civilisation ideal, deems as what is going wrong on the island.  

As the island, the tropical paradise, on which the group of boys are stranded upon is not, and cannot be held to blame for the regression, the only other possibility is that the boys themselves are responsible. This in itself can be attributed to several factors, which overall can be identified as conflicts; there are several of these beginning and growing throughout the novel, and towards the end they all draw to a climax. A major one, which initiates almost unnoticeably at the start of the novel is the conflict between two characters, Ralph and Jack, each a leader, each representing a different way of life.

Jack is the novel’s primary representative of the instincts of savagery, violence, and the desire for power, which is shown from the beginning. When the idea of having a Chief is mentioned, Jack speaks out immediately. "I ought to be chief," Jack says with simple arrogance, "because I'm chapter chorister and head boy." He is furious when he loses the election to Ralph, which subtly begins their conflict, and continually pushes the boundaries of his subordinate role in the group. Jack and his compatriots are portrayed as militaristic and aggressive, with Jack's bold manner and the choir marching in step with one another. They are the first concrete entrance of civilization onto the island and a decidedly negative one; in fact, they are first referred to as a collective, as a ‘creature’, and the adjective ‘dark’ is used in accordance, immediately creating an uneasy air about the newcomers.

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A decided military authoritarian, ordering his choir as if they were troops, allowing room for neither discussion nor dissent, he significantly chooses for his choir the role of hunters; he selects that task which is most violent and, in this society, most related to military values. However, as his inability to kill the pig demonstrates, Jack is not yet accustomed to violence. Jack must prepare himself to commit a violent act, for he is still constrained by societal rules that oppose this behavior; his authoritarian attitude has given him a predisposition to violence, but he must shed the lessons ...

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