Funfair - Narrative Writing

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I stood on a rickety, wooden platform above the entrance to the funfair. The wood was very old, as was evident by the many missing planks. Over the years, people gad engraved things into the cold wood. I could see everything. Every icy breath I took I inhaled the aroma of hotdogs and popcorn. Everywhere I looked, I saw little children devouring pink balls of fuzz on sticks. The floor was coated in crisp orange leaves, and surrounding the funfair were dark, naked trees. Hiding in between the leaves, was a mixture of litter; ripped chocolate bar wrapper and empty drinks cans blended into the foliage.  Below me were queues of people, eagerly awaiting entrance to the funfair. The chain of people became increasingly excited as they took a few infrequent steps forwards.

From my sanctuary, I could see a group of distrustful teenagers eyeing a handbag. They all wore old, dark, tattered clothing with many tears in them. The sign of rebellious teenagers. A few of the thieves were trying to brainwash a member of their group into trying to steal it. The reassured youth snuck like a wolf, close to the potential victim, only to be thwarted at the last second. The pack of thieves moved away out of sight, but I knew that they would still be on the prowl for their next victims.

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I found my attention drawn towards a particularly colourful ride; the teacups. It had multicoloured lights placed strategically on it, so as to attract the attention of little children; a flash of azure, a streak of gold. From the ride came the shrill screams of delighted children, mixed with a toe-tapping tune.  After the ride came to a stop, I could hear the children begging their parents for just one more go, and their angry cries when they were denied their request.

Next to the teacups, stood the most gigantic ride I had ever seen. The braver children ran towards ...

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