Going Over The Top

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#Going over the Top

Continuous, ongoing shells were swirling and coiling vigorously throughout the sky as the bombardment of gunfire was being propelled at us. We tried to send some bullets back. The bullets flew like planes of devastation surrounded by an air of rivalry. I was imagining never seeing my loved ones again: this was the darkest, most depressing thought that anyone could ever have. As well as the bullets and emotion, there was also the disgusting odour of trench foot creeping through the nostrils of the soldiers, like an enemy coming to bombard your lungs, which made most heave the first time they smelt it.

          Suddenly, there was a cry of despair from one soldier, as he fell to his knees and groveled. He had not been wounded but yet he was in such distress. Terror streaming out of his eyes. He had just been told that within the next ten minutes we would be charging over the top to try advance our position; one would think if you wished to advance you would build the trenches forwards rather than sideway. There was a whirlwind of mixed emotions, which made the blood rush to the head. Most just dazed into the distance, it was as if everything froze at an instant…

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          “GAS! Gas!” All of the soldiers scrambled for their masks. It seemed all of the soldiers were quick enough to save their insides from being cremated. One solider crashed to the floor clasping his throat. He gripped on to my leg. I couldn’t hear him. Panic-stricken. However, I attempted to read his lips – they said “Help me!” He stopped struggling; I felt the grip he had on my leg get weaker and weaker, until he was dead. I felt an ice cold tear, trialing down the sides of my face. With an uproar ...

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