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The three bears and Goldilocks The day seemed normal enough when it started. As usual, we decided to take a walk in the woods while our breakfast was cooling. Little did we know, life would never be the same when we walked back along the path we were so familiar with. No one goes to that part of the garden any more. We pretended it was all a dream, but every time we leave the house to take our daily walk, the door was bolted with a strong lock. Here is how it all started. While the family of bears went for a stroll, a girl called Goldilocks, named after her blond wig, was also wandering in the woods. ...read more.


We should have been more suspicious when we noticed cigarette buts littered along the path. My wife just thought that I had taken up smoking and decided to mention it when our son wasn't around. Back at the house the hung-over and very hungry Goldilocks forgot all about her plans when she smelt the porridge. Pleased at her new discovery she tasted daddy bear's porridge; she decided it was too hot. Then She tried mummy bears porridge but she found it too cold. "This porridge is just right" she remarked after tasting baby bears porridge. We were surprised that the door which we had left shut was now wide open. We swiftly noticed that the girl ate my son's porridge and tasted the other two. ...read more.


Towered over by the bears, her hair stood on its end. I was so astounded by the situation. An eerie silence filled the room. Suddenly, Goldilocks sprang up from the bed and headed for the window. Before I knew it, my trembling hand was griping a loaded pistol. No person must ever know our secret. I pulled the trigger. Only when the blank eyes of the corpse stared back at me did I realise what I had committed. We gave baby bear a sleeping potion while we got rid of the evidence. When he woke up, we told him everything was a dream and the girl just jumped out of the window. But he knows the truth. Now no one goes to that part of the garden any more. They were busy trying to forget what had happened. THE END ...read more.

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