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A Hidden Treasure, Darkly

        It was a dark, misty night; the mild breeze of summer rushing past him, carrying the foul scent of the small river nearby. However, the smell did not seem to bother Tom in the slightest because he knew tonight he was about to unravel a mystery that had puzzled many citizens of The Drive for decades.

Strange as it was for a street to be called The Drive, even stranger was the fact that there was no house number 3 as the houses surrounding Sarah’s house were numbered 2 and 5. Although some just accepted the fact that this was simply a numbering mistake, others stayed curious and curiosity was what got Tom interested.

Desperate to talk to Sarah, he ran, slashing through air like a bullet, down The Drive and came to a halt at house number 4.

‘Sarah!’ whispered loudly Tom, panting uncontrollably, as he threw an unnecessarily large stone at her window.

‘Tom!’ muttered Sarah. ‘What are you doing here? It’s past midnight!’

‘Sarah, we don’t have much time,’ said Tom with excitement and fear dripping down his face now.

‘What are you talking about?’ but before Tom could open his mouth to say a word, she too seemed to catch on but didn’t look as excited as Tom. Sarah has always been one of those who just went with the saying that the numbering of the houses was nothing more than a mistake, ‘Hold on’.

She appeared at the door about a second later wearing her bright pink pyjamas.

‘Sarah, look!’ said Tom pointing at the little jet of green light that was circling above one of the tiles next to Sarah’s house where house number 3 should have been. ‘We need to run,’ shouted Tom and took hold of Sarah arm, ‘Quick!’ and they hurried off towards the source of that dim green light.

        Tom was the kind of boy who liked unravelling mysteries beyond the imagination of a normal fourteen-year-old. Always looking for an answer. Always looking for a greater picture of the world we live in.

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Sarah on the other hand, preferred maintaining the view she already had of the world, but curiosity was her weakness. Every time Tom discovered something new, Sarah did all she could to help him and tonight was the same story.

        As soon as their feet touched that tile, everything went cold and the ground beneath them disappeared. What seemed to look like street lights zoomed in and out of view; the motion knocking every bit of oxygen out of their lungs as if forced out by a vacuum cleaner. They spun violently and finally found themselves lying on the ...

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