Hallows Marsh

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Alexander Bateman,  GCSE Coursework, Imaginative Writing.

Hallows Marsh

        As the fog swept in from the sea to cover the marshland, and the sea gulls went back to their nests for the night, an eerie screech echoed through the air, but not the thickening fog.  All was dark, and then the solemn silence that had always been there came back, as if the screech had been lost in eternal darkness. Then, suddenly, there was another screech. A young boy, the age of no more than seven was stuck in a marsh bog.  He was slowly drowning and there was no one to help him.  However much he howled or yelled his screams never pierced the ever-hardening mist.  Then, the silence came back and this time it would last.  There would be no more screams until twenty years later.

        John and Jake were best friends they would always do absolutely everything together, no matter what it was or when it was, they stuck together like glue.  They had done lots of daring and naughty things in their lives, but nothing could possibly match what they were planning to do tonight.  They were going to go to the scariest place in the whole of England.  (At least in their eyes it was.)  And they were planning to go by themselves.  Everything that they had planned was perfect.  They were going to go down to Hallows Marsh and look around.  Their friends had told them the story of what happened to a boy down there about twenty years ago but they took no notice.  

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        That night, when everything was quite they snuck out of bed at about twelve thirty.  Due to the fact that both of them were quite small they didn’t have to worry about making too much noise when it came to leaving the house.  Jake had some chocolate bars and drink in his rucksack, in case they got hungry and John had a torch.  They were both wearing large barber coats to keep them warm.

        At last they got out of John’s house and started to walk down the winding path that lead to the town of Hallow.  They lived in ...

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