He had dark haired, with brown eyes that stood out, he isn't very tall but can still stand his ground.

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The Sandersville Mansion

“Hurry up, were going to be late” screamed my older brother. He has always been the bossy one since dad passed away. He was very much like my father, same sturdy shoulders and a glare that would send a shiver down your spine. He had dark haired, with brown eyes that stood out, he isn’t very tall but can still stand his ground. He is not the kind of person you want to vex.

“Okay Moe, I’m almost done” I retaliated. We were going to visit our grandparents in Sandersville, we go there every winter. Even though my brother and I aren’t very close to them, our father would have wanted us to visit them and make sure they are well. My brother was only 22 but has a mental age of 44. I and he have gone through many problems in our life, and now all left in our lives are each other. Our parents died in a car accident, they were on their way to Sandersville to pick us up, and I still remember that day. My grandmother went to pick up the phone and out of the blue dropped the phone receiver and broke down crying, and told us our parents had passed away, that moment lasted a life time, questions running through my mind. My brother was 19 at the time, he reacted very differently from me, he knew he had to be the strong one now and not show his weakness in front of me, and so far he has succeeded in his mission. Sometimes I wonder what would have happened to me if he wasn’t here.

I climbed into my brothers old ford while listening to Moe shouting at me, “We are going to be late because of you, grandma and grandpa are expecting us in an hour!” he protested.

“It wasn’t my fault, I had to look for my favorite t-shirt” I answered. He always wanted to be punctual and on time. I began to lose myself with the sound of the crushing gravel under me and slowly fell asleep. I began to dream about an old house. I began to walk towards it struggling not to slip on the muddy grass, the house was massive with gigantic windows just like the ones you see in olden films. I began to walk through the threshold and the smell of dead corpses filled the air, the windows were so dusty you couldn’t make out what is inside. I tried to open the tall wooden door, I was implying all my strength but it wasn’t moving an inch, so I decided to walk through the side door instead. I began to walk through the forest of a garden, fighting away cog webs and rats running past my feet. I finally reached the side door, some part of me didn’t want to enter but I could feel the urge to look inside as if someone from behind my shoulder is whispering into my ear. I turned the rusty knob and pushed the squeaky door open, a breeze of warm air gushed out as if the door hasn’t been opened for many years.

“Wake up John we’re here” my brother informed me while shaking my shoulders. I stretched and took a long yawn before I got out of the car and walked up that familiar neatly done garden, beautiful colourful flowers bordering the gothic fountain that my father had given to my grandfather as a gift. Before my brother could ring the bell, my grandparents opened the door with big grins in there faces like court jesters being promoted to earls. My grandmother hugged me and whispered into my ear “how you doing Johnny?”

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“I’m great grandma, I came first my last test” I notified her, knowing she was going to ask about my grades anyway. I switched hugging partners with my brother and went to embrace my grandfather, but instead he shook my hand saying “your growing now, I need to treat you like a man” and gave me a reassuring wink, my grandfather had big blue eyes just like my mothers, he looked surprisingly well for an 86 year old, he practiced archery and gardening regularly. He was by far my favourite out of all 4 of my grandparents, he was very ...

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