Original Writing
It had been an unimaginable day; every inch of his body had been screaming out, in pain and yet, something in the blinding white pain had relieved him. Even now as his very own body was about to break, he suddenly realised, and he understood why they had done what they did.
Nothing had made any sense as he got up that morning lying face down in a pool of his own vomit. Even as he stood up a dull wave of nausea passed through him, followed by a shudder against the cold heavy rain, as he supported his head in his hands he took in his surroundings an unknown backstreet with graffiti on the walls and a burnt-out car. He looked down himself and saw his suit was covered in vomit. He had no idea how he had got there but he knew he should get home. Heading to the end of the street he looked out and saw it was still dark in the sky. Looking around for a street name and saw he was on Brick Lane, in Poplar, and then he realised he was on the other side of the Thames to where he lived at 35 Lordship Lane in Dulwich.
As he started pacing down the road, rain was still falling hard and the water had had made oily streams filled the road and pavement like raging rivers. Some cars were already driving so he kept a lookout for any taxis which might be looking for a fare as money was no object to him. Soon he had managed to hail a cab and was soon home, as he pulled up to his £7million house he realised how pointless all this money was soon he was changed and showered and he decided on heading down to the Thames to brighten up his dark mood. It was raining even more heavily than earlier and as he arrived he noticed how high the river was, but as he had a nice 427 Catalina 42foot boat to take out, it had been moored on Coldharbour lane and for the first time that day he smiled.
It had been an unimaginable day; every inch of his body had been screaming out, in pain and yet, something in the blinding white pain had relieved him. Even now as his very own body was about to break, he suddenly realised, and he understood why they had done what they did.
Nothing had made any sense as he got up that morning lying face down in a pool of his own vomit. Even as he stood up a dull wave of nausea passed through him, followed by a shudder against the cold heavy rain, as he supported his head in his hands he took in his surroundings an unknown backstreet with graffiti on the walls and a burnt-out car. He looked down himself and saw his suit was covered in vomit. He had no idea how he had got there but he knew he should get home. Heading to the end of the street he looked out and saw it was still dark in the sky. Looking around for a street name and saw he was on Brick Lane, in Poplar, and then he realised he was on the other side of the Thames to where he lived at 35 Lordship Lane in Dulwich.
As he started pacing down the road, rain was still falling hard and the water had had made oily streams filled the road and pavement like raging rivers. Some cars were already driving so he kept a lookout for any taxis which might be looking for a fare as money was no object to him. Soon he had managed to hail a cab and was soon home, as he pulled up to his £7million house he realised how pointless all this money was soon he was changed and showered and he decided on heading down to the Thames to brighten up his dark mood. It was raining even more heavily than earlier and as he arrived he noticed how high the river was, but as he had a nice 427 Catalina 42foot boat to take out, it had been moored on Coldharbour lane and for the first time that day he smiled.