His heart was pounding in his head as he skipped round the ring, only narrowly avoiding his opponent's punches.

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        His heart was pounding in his head as he skipped round the ring, only narrowly avoiding his opponent’s punches. Sam Smith, his opponent, was a well built man with huge fists almost the size of his head. He had short black hair with queer looking quiff at the front of his head. Tom on the other hand was far smaller and thinner; he looked rather insignificant when stood next to Sam Smith.

         Tom continued to dance round the ring in an attempt to avoid the punches being hurled around the ring. Then Sam swung again at Tom, Tom ducked and counter attacked him landing a horrific blow in the centre of the beasts face. Now swaying Frank was obviously quiet groggy from the last blow, and in one triumphant moment for Tom, Frank reluctantly collapsed and crashed to the ground.

        Everything was silent nobody could believe what they had just witnessed; Tom parker had just defeated the almighty Sam Smith, and had become the new world champion. Looking down he saw Sam lying motionless on the floor, a huge rush of happiness shot through his body as the news started to settle in. Crying he collapsed to his knees, while crowd burst into cheers. He had done it; he had beaten the unbeatable and changed boxing forever.

 Leaning back against what he thought were the ropes of the ring, he found himself looking up at the bright blue sky. “What are you doing?” said Rosie in a confused way. Turning round he discovered that he had been sleeping against a wooden fence, which explained why his neck hurt so much. “I must have dosed off”

“So it’s a good thing I woke you up, were late for chemistry and you know what Mr Gilligan’s like don’t you?”

“Yer” he said as he picked up his bag. Rosie was a large girl with long black hair, she didn’t have many friends, but neither did Tom so he wasn’t picky. All the way to chemistry Tom thought about the dream, he really enjoyed beating Sam at anything, and even thought it was a dream it made Tom happy. Sam was an arrogant boy, who only pleasures were winning and making others miserable, mostly Tom. Tom hated and envied Sam the same time; he was so desperate to be popular like him. Tom had friends but most people would have called them leaches, all they ever did was get money off him, and if they didn’t they didn’t talk to him.

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        He entered the chemistry class and looked toward the right were Mr Gilligan was impatiently waiting for him to apologise “Why are you late parker?”

“What, oh ere, I didn’t here the bell go sorry”

“I take it you’ve noticed we have a new seating plan” he said pointing towards Toms new place. Tom stood there motionless for a second he had been sat next to Sam, how did this happen there’s only a 30-1 chance of this happening he thought to himself. “Stop wasting time and get to your seat, boy!” Discussed Tom slowly made his way to ...

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