How does H.G Wells create suspense in 'The Cone'?

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How does H.G Wells create suspense in ‘The Cone’?

        There are numerous techniques that an author can use to create interest and suspense when writing a gothic story. Examples of these are short sentences, pathetic fallacy, and emotive language. However Wells then goes on to combine this with a romantic element, and incorporates a crime of passion into the story. So not only does Wells use the gothic genre and its techniques to create tension, but also that of the romantic genre.

        This story is written in the third person, which works superbly as it gives an overview of the opinions of all the characters and their thoughts. For instance Wells writes, ‘She had an impulse to warn him in an undertone, but she could not frame a word. “Don’t go!” and “Beware of him!” struggled in her mind, and the moment passed.’ This technique allows us to connect with more than one of the characters and understand the different points of view, and feelings emerging from them. In a way it prevents the reader from becoming overly bias, because they can see situations from more than one persons perspective.

        The story starts with a description, using long sentences and scores of adjectives, ‘The night was hot and overcast, the sky red, rimmed with the lingering sunset of midsummer…’ This sets the scene in a serene way that leads the reader into a false sense of security, a beautiful night with two lovers talking in lowered voices. However on reading the story retrospectively the opening paragraph could be viewed differently. The sky could be interpreted as angry, or brooding. It could be ominously setting the scene for things to come, it already informs us that the story is set a night, could this be the first gothic element to be incorporated?

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        Further on in the story, Wells puts a stress on the word tomorrow, twice, clearly indicating that this is something that we should take heed of. Raut says, ‘But what does it matter? An end comes, an end to all this cruelty …… TO- MORROW.’ This could be a sign that perhaps Raut and Mrs Horrocks were intending to run away the next day, leaving Mr Horrocks behind. If this was the case this could be another romantic element of the story, two lovers running away to be together, but twisted into a gothic genre because they are stopped in ...

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