How does Shakespeare explore the theme of loyalty in Othello?

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Naomi Timpson 10R – Miss Swann

Essay: How does Shakespeare explore the theme of loyalty in “Othello”?

During the play, Shakespeare explores many forms of loyalty: loyalty between friends, colleagues and lovers, loyalty to family and to the state. Set in Venice during the Jacobean Period, some people think that “Othello” was written for James I as a warning against dishonest and disloyal advisors. To be loyal, you must be at once trustworthy and trusting. Many characters in “Othello” are either trustworthy or trusting but few possess both of these desirable qualities.

 

Iago is the character who shows least signs of loyalty in the play. Shakespeare shows us that Iago is dishonest and disloyal in the most blatant of ways. One of the clearest signs is when Iago himself says “I am not what I am” Act 1 Scene 1, Line 66. This is a misquote from the bible and shows that Iago is proud of being duplicative and pays no heed to God. By the end of his second soliloquy, Iago has managed to convince himself that both Othello and Cassio have slept with his wife: “twixt my sheets, he’s done my office…”Iago of Othello, Act 1 Scene 3, Lines 369-370, “for I fear Cassio with my night-cap too” Iago, Act 2 Scene 1, Line 288. Whether or not Iago has a capacity to be trusting is not clear in the play, however his untrustworthiness would counterbalance any signs of his ability to trust others. Although he believes Othello has abused his trust in not promoting him to be his lieutenant, you get the impression that he would use any event as an excuse to justify his villainy. 

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Although Othello is absolutely trustworthy, his fault lies in his ability to trust others. The Senate and the people of Cyprus hold him in high regard. He shows his loyalty to Venice when he says “I…do undertake these present wars…most humbly, therefore, bending to your state” Act 1 Scene 3, Lines 230-2 agreeing to go to war on his wedding night. However, Othello is very naïve about love, relationships and fidelity. When Iago makes accusations against Desdemona, Othello automatically believes him and we get the impression that, had Desdemona or Cassio been as devious as Iago, Othello’s wrath ...

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The essay has an okay structure, having a clear introduction. It does, however, need a strong conclusion to summarise the importance of loyalty and how Shakespeare manipulates it. It's a shame to see line references used when quotes are embedded as this disrupts the flow unnecessarily. The writing style is strong, and spelling, punctuation and grammar are used well!

The analysis in this essay is sound, but there are places where improvements could be made. I would've liked to have seen some more close analysis of language and imagery, as this is particularly important throughout the play. There is a distinct lack of audience response in this essay, and I would note this is a common problem at GCSE. Although the question doesn't explicitly ask for a discussion of the audience's response, you cannot gain higher marks without exploring the dramatic effect of loyalty on the audience. This can easily be done by discussing how Desdemona's loyalty is questioned by Iago, causing Othello's tragedy to further and thus the hatred for Iago is increased. I'm not a big fan of one paragraph dedicated to contextual information - if you want to be sophisticated, this context should be woven into all of your points. It just seems quite forced in this essay!

The essay engages with the task superbly, showing clear awareness of the importance of loyalty to the plot's destination and the dramatic effect of the play. I liked how the introduction made it clear which forms of loyalty are explored by Shakespeare - it could've been improved by showing awareness of this importance early on. Each character's loyalty is discussed, showing a good knowledge of the play.