How does the writer create atmosphere in this extract? The quote thats why the water front is no place for him (Rodolfo) Eddie is making Rodolfo feel unwanted and like this place is no place for you.

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The writer creates a tense, aggressive and misleading atmosphere. Miller creates a tense atmosphere as Eddie is attacking Rodolfo with sneery comments to lower his self esteem and make Rodolfo look bad in Catherine’s eyes. The quote ‘that’s why the water front is no place for him (Rodolfo)’ Eddie is making Rodolfo feel unwanted and like this place is no place for you. Also this could imply that Catherine also no place for him and he needs to back off.

  In the stage direction Miller make the atmosphere tense by I quote ‘(has has been unconsciously twisting the newspaper into a tight role)’ and everyone is looking at him and acknowledging him knowing how much Rodolfo annoys him. Then miller writes in the stage direction about the paper ‘suddenly tears in two’ this doesn’t only show eddies frustration and strength but also could symbolise Eddie and Catherine’s relationship, it shows if Eddie keeps on pushing her and twisting their relationship and eventually it will break and Catherine will have to make a decision and that is exactly what happens later on in the play when Catherine has to chose between staying with Eddie or going with Rodolfo and she finally feels she needs to stand up for herself and grow up so goes with Rodolfo.

    Eddie then moves on to how Marco and him should go see a fight together, and constantly addressing Marco showing he feels Marco as the only person who can put Rodolfo down a peg or two, he loves the dominance over Rodolfo so then takes advantage of this by always asking for Marco’s approval on matters on how Rodolfo has done bad, like when Catherine and Rodolfo were out late at the picture’s and Eddie states about how Rodolfo might get picked up if he’s out that late and how he ‘dragged’ Catherine off and shouldn’t be out so late with her. Marco asks Eddie what has he done and Eddie tells him about being late In and Marco say to Rodolfo ‘you come home early now’ Eddie loves how Marco can embarrass and be dominant over Rodolfo.

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    When Eddie is talking about fighting Marco is uneasy because he can see that it’s not a good idea, but Eddie is making the atmosphere so misleading he is being nice and saying things like you want to come and I treat you and he says ‘I’ll buy the tickets’ at this point the reader is not sure of what is going to happen but we have this thought at the back of our head that its not a good idea and foreshadowing danger.

   Then the atmosphere turns violent and tense, it starts out Eddie saying about ...

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